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Reviews For: Swing

Mitsi1819 2007-07-14 ch 1,	abuseI know it has been a long time since you wrote this, but I am still going to review. 'Cause I think that this is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read (and I've read a lot of them =P) I'm seriously at lost for words after reading this! The way you've discribed the whole ordeal makes me just imagine it. It is like I can see it happen right in front of me... I hope that, one day, you will write a sequel to this story (no pressure =P) I would really like to know what would have happend next... Anyways; I think you've delivered a masterpiece of fanfiction here! Awesome, Amazing and all other words of praise I can think of!
JennCorinthos 2007-07-14 ch 1,	abuseWOW! Please tell me there is a continuation... Loved it... JENNIFER
ReJo 2007-07-04 ch 1,	abuseThis is an amazing story. You write angst very well. Their emotions were believable and were conveyed well.
Elizabeth 2006-11-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was very good I like the fact that you have included the fact that Danny is really "A one night man" and the belivable emotions thast they both show. Please continue because it was good and wasn't slutty you could really imangine it happening PLZ PLZ PLZ continue thanks PS I can't see anyway to improve exept to say how old the child is.
SallyJetson 2006-11-19 ch 1,	abuseThat's just sad! But I understand why you had to write it. These things just have to be written because it is part of the real world unfortunately. But did it have to be D & L? :)
chili-peppers 2006-08-31 ch 1,	abuseawesome story! i really enjoyed it so different good job!
Adamsgirl 2006-08-31 ch 1,	abusewow. I don't even know if I should add this to the D/L Archive. :p I liked that fact that Danny got scared and left her alone but now he regrets it. I could see Lindsay not wanting him to see their child. Lindsay is stubborn and Danny can be an idiot so you writing them this way is believable Great job. :D
DistractedlyHere 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abuseWow, Danny's an a$$. He shouldn't see her! My kids love the swing too and you describe the scene very well. Very well written.
passionatecsi 2006-08-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. I can relate. I too have a daughter whose father left us. He never once tried to see her. He was a PA State Trooper. It brought back memories. It kind of mad me sad. I would hope that Danny wouldn't be like that. This was a good story.
The Little Corinthian 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abuseYikes. Angst is an understatement :0) Nice job! Interesting take on Danny and Lindsay's relationship: as much of a shipper as I am, it's refreshing to read something in which Danny doesn't do the right thing. Good work. :0P
TVchick08 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abuseaww. it's very sweet. I loved it.

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