Omg!
That was so sad!
I absolutly love it!
-Sassy

That was a good drama, even though I think you should stay to humor. I could almost feel the funny trying to break out. Don't get me wrong, it was a great story, I just think funny is more your style. Or part of your style. Something, I can't even rememebr what I was trying to say. Keep on writing. That works.

it kinda made me cry

Oh my god that was so sad i was trying not to cry the entire time i was reading this story... WAH! (crys in chair)