amazing. the little snapshots of her life worked well. and of course, the last scene was heartbreaking. really.

"She was sobbing, and she didn't realize it. Crack."

Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

What an amazing work. You have just made me realize that Mikoto is one of my favorite characters in the Naruto series. Thank you so much!

KoneKo

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I love Mikoto, and this just made me go, "aww man." It was amazingly well-written, I felt so sorry for her near the end. You are truly spectacular.

Weird as it sounds, Mikoto is one of my favourite characters. I know very little about her, but everything I've read in here just makes me love her more. It's so well done. _x;

This is no less than amazing. It was so touching throughout, I was actually sad that she died (which doesn't usually happen with characters I know nothing about.) The writing-style, the description, the dialogue, everything was damn-near perfect... I'm jealous, seriously. At the very least envious.

Itachi seems like a bad omen, doesn't he? I love the way you portrayed him. Keep writing, you have a gift.

Dark Days.

omg i started crying...needless to say this was a very enjoyable fic though depressing but thats how it should be thanks for the great fic

aw!

I loved the style of this oneshot; it really kept me engrossed from beginning to end. These instances of Mikoto seemed to me as if it were a snapshot of each instance of her life...or at least that's what I saw it as.

You have no idea how happy I am to read Mikoto fanfiction, especially of the well-written kind. This has gone on to my favorites, and I hope you continue making more in the future. Awesome job.

Oh.My.God.

Loved it. I love the characterization and everything about it. Mikoto is one of my top characters, and I love fics like these that give us an outlook on her.

Ja Ne

sasuke fanatic1

aw! so sad but it was good!

o_o WOW. this was the first story about Mikoto i've ever seen. I just HAD to read it. And im glad I did. It was very intresting, and I enjoyed it. _ nicely done.

really good!

Poor, dear Mikoto. I always rather liked her; she seemed so nice. You always have such perfect last lines. Rather summarizes everything in one word, especially this time. The characterizations seemed right; Itachi's too -something-, Sasuke's just shy of good enough; Fugaku is strict and distant; and Mikoto's just the one trying to hold it all together, kind and gentle.

Another great one.