You caught Jarod quite well there - the always ready to pounce in judgment before he knows the whole story aspect he has when it comes to dealing with certain people.

Hi

WOW! That was good.

Great ! What's really cool about it, is that we don't know who's dead until some time... I really liked it.

sad, but good

dang that was the most beautiful story I ever heard. sniff, sniff.

This was so beautiful. And so sad. It almost made me cry. Thanks!

That was really sad!

how sad!

All I can say is, "WOW!"

v.g. !

Loved it! Sad and moving. Hope this is a What if... story, though

Another great story .I don't know how you do it but I appreciate it :D

Good fic! I liked it. You have a very good handle on the characters and their emotions. I do have two nitpicky things, though. In the fourth paragraph, you wrote 'Raine's', which should have been Raines's (since his name has an s on the end), and personally, I'd have put it in the angst category. Don't let the nitpicky stuff get you down, I liked this fic! :-)

It is beautifull.

[crack]

The sound of the ball heading out of the park...again...