If you don't like a pairing, don't write a story about them. Simple, huh? Some people actually like this pairing, y'know, so you don't go around making a fic simply because you hate the pairing. Just leave the pairing alone if you don't like it.

Gyahh! I'm nearly crying. D: You have a real way with writing.

I think I may just go through every single fic of yours that I'll know the fandom of - don't mind me. :3

wa!! Why do u hav ta be lik that!!*sobs*

Gwah?? You dont like the Cloud/Leon pairing? Thats so evil! Though I liked the mini story. . .apart from the end bit. . .Cloud does so love Leon. . .Hes just to shy to admit it. . .

Ouch! Dang, Leon will be feeling that burn for quite a while... Poor guy. (Though he should know better than confessing after such a quick round.)

The writing here felt a little rushed, but had a (surprisingly successful) big impact in the end. Congrats to you for being able to create so much emotion with so few words. Most people drag angst on and on and on with long, windy sentences and thought processes. Drives me nuts sometimes.

And while I can't really imagine Cloud being such an enormous ass (despite his "tough guy" coldness), it works here, I guess. Nice piece.

This just shows how much of a loser you are if the only reason you wrote this was to be a response.

Oh. Cold and cruel, although it's not very obvious that you hate the pairing from the story though. I loved the last line though.

Ohmygawd.
Wonderful.
I loved this.

The ending was...
sad. ;_;
Poor Leon. xDD

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Fuckin' Cloud. Sometimes I want to fucking strangle him for being so goddamn stubborn, but I want to love him so much, he dies at the same time. I make no sense, but you do. I love your second(?) paragraph, But, i gotta go. I'll re-read, then sleep.

Ima use that line to dump some guy...I already had a dream of me in some school and everybody thing I'm a slut...all because this guy loves but hates me...then I end up late to geometry...cause i forgot how to get around in the school cause i'm pissed...thanks archy...You gave me the energy to write my damned dream!

That was the dumbest, most pointless thing. Why write something you hate for no other reason than to be snarky?

cloud is a bitch. well, here anyway. poor leon... he needs a hug, i guess. well, anyway, the fic was cool...

Awesome short piece. Very porny, very to the point. But roti.

Your pairing preference makes me sad. D:

um...okay, whyd you write it

...At least their somewhat in character. I like Leon/Cloud but they always make Cloud like Sora in some way...And he's really not. The last line was awesome, nice way of putting a guy down.