Bravo! You and your mirrors! You and your crashing chandeliers! Lots of good stuff in this story. Must say I was sure Tallie was going to turn out evil. And not to worry: your requests for reviews are nowhere near obnoxious!

Hurt Dean and hapy endings make me happy and this story had both which I loved. Great job!

*hugs* AWESOME STORY!

*is dead* LOVED it!

I really enjoyed the story, mean ghost, hurt Dean and all! Great job.

Good Story Keep It Coming

Nice job bringing in Sam's dream to explain his unusual instant suspicion of Tallie. I would have liked one line with Ovington telling Dean he would cover all of Dean's medical expenses, but I suppose there's some bogus medical claim for Alexander Popinnoogle being filed right now. *snerk* Anyway, I'm with Sam in not wanting Ovington to get off the hook scott free - although Tallie ending up in foster care wouldn't be right either. I propose some sort of on-going Team Winchester financial support. Writing out a monthly check to bankroll their efforts would remind Ovington of what happened so he couldn't just forget about his role in the whole thing. He seems the type to be able to sweep unpleasant memories completely under the rug. I could see him in a year or two, once they've moved into a new house, convincing himself the whole thing was a bad dream of Tallie's. That might make kind of a fun sequel! *hint hint*

Great ending I was shocked by the dumbass stabbing Dean though and I thought Sam was gonna choke the crap out of him when he didnt press charges. But it was a really good story I really enjoyed it.

update soon...please...we left dean in a precarious(sp?) situation...and he's already taken a little tumble so..it'd be nice for him to not...you know...die...

Well crap Sammy you had better put those long legs to good use or your going to be in the slammer with Bubba and that aint good for our pretty boy. Loved the update cant wait for the next chapter. Poor Tallie I hate it when people are mean to kids.

i have a very interesting love/hate relationship with cliffhangers...at the moment i'm boardering on hate...mostly because my man dean is in danger...so please update asap...so i don't go crazy

Good story! The interactions between Dean and the little girl are awesome. I feel bad for Mr. Ovington, but he was just trying to protect his daughter. I think your story flows well, and your descriptions paint wonderful pictures. I can't wait to see what's going to happen with the Ovingtons, and the boys in the graveyard.

Interesting. Was George going to commit suicide on his wife's grave and that's why he's there with a sword? Sheer speculation on my part. I'm very curious to see where you go next... Poor Tallie is going to end up with no one, isn't she? Is there going to be an explanation for why Sam felt suspicious of her at the beginning?

Oh crap the bitch figured it out didnt she. This was a great chapter absolutely adore how kids automatically gravitate to Dean. Adults dont give kids enough credit kids know who will look after them and protect them and who genuinly cares for them. Daddy dearest needs to get a grip so he killed her she deserved it he needs to put his daughter first for once.

This is a really good story, and I love the little girl. You have to update quickly, it wouldn't be fair to leave us hanging like that.

Oh I have so many different theories about what is going on and what is going to happen next - and they all contradict one another!

This has caught my attention in a big way. What a great beginning! I'm setting an alert for this story so I won't miss the next chapter - I can't wait.