   RoseTornado 9/15/07 . chapter 12"Balor placed a curse upon certain Cynrogs a long time ago. If he dies, they die with him," the Doctor explained. "That's why she didn't want him tossed out the window. However now that she's free-"
How exactly did the Doctor free her?
You actually had a potentially good plot for this story, but I don't think you developed your characters well enough. Sometimes, they seem extremely juvenile, which is totally out of character for them, and there are a lot of things you just leave hanging, never bothered to explain. |
| RoseTornado 9/15/07 . chapter 1 It's aspirin, not penicillin, that's deadly to the Doctor. |
| Faramirlover 3/1/07 . chapter 13 Sorry that this is the only chapter I reviewed but I wanted to read the whole thing. this was really good. Keep up the good work.
Faramirlover |
| kiss-her-theta 12/3/06 . chapter 13 gr8 story- loved it! |
| I-Confuse-Everyone 11/30/06 . chapter 13 Aww great ending to a great story. Loved it |
| cheri1 11/27/06 . chapter 13 aw, sweet chapter! i loved it! :) |
| RagamuffinSundrop 11/27/06 . chapter 13 Very Nice |
| Ignoramus 11/27/06 . chapter 13 :D Great chapter! Please continue! |
| mishy-mo 11/27/06 . chapter 13 aw! |
| ScreamingSanity 11/26/06 . chapter 13 Fantastic love it. |
| bex19 11/24/06 . chapter 13 That was fab! are you doing another sequel? |
| clairlune 11/23/06 . chapter 13 Woot! Fluff! Keep 'em coming! |
| Scout Girl 11/23/06 . chapter 13 The End
Wonderful!
SG |
| I-Confuse-Everyone 11/19/06 . chapter 12 Yay me love this very much! Can't wait for more (assuming there is more lol!) |
| MYBIGBLUEBOX 11/18/06 . chapter 12 hi excellent new chappy please keep it coming. |
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