Aww- What, no violet eyes? No talking to animals? What's wrong with your Mary Sue? (Seriously, cute geek pick-up bit.)

I know I'm way late, but... this gave me a big grin! Yay! Go Frohike! Trouble is... need more! hehe.

Aw.Great Frohike fanfict! I hope you'll get inspiration and continue again. It's never too late to pick it up. It was great. Good job! Hehe. Frohike kicks ass!

LOL! :D

LMAO! I love it :o) Now if only that could happen to Byers the poor lonely sweetie ;o) great story :o)

that was cute.

That was so cute!

So far so good! Finish the story! -

Heee hee! I'm giggling so hard I can barely write! Lil Frohike finds his sweet heart at a film store! Well done.

loved this story! a writer after my own heart. More more more more

Melvin fic at last! hehehe... I always knew he was a ladies man :)

This was so good! I got the Author Alert yesterday but didn't get a chance to see what it was until now. I'm sooo glad you're writing Lone Gunmen fics! I love your writing and I love the Lone Gunmen. What a combination! I hope you do more LG fics. (But also do more Terminator fics too, please?)

Intriguing story...hope there will be more! Though my fave GM is Langly, I also like Frohike and enjoyed reading a fic about him for a change.

Well-done and especially like the 3-rd person POV style.