Ooh i soo love this story, so very sweet. Its amazingly good i just couldnt move from were i was sat until i finished reading it. Will you be writing more soon? I hope so i just cant wait to see how it turns out. Great job at writing this i love it so much.

This is really good. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Oh and what'll happen when they get to school?

It just had to be Chiyo, didn't it...

Aww, I was really hoping Hana would kiss Tohru.

Lol The part about Hana's parents was unexpected.

You're doing a good job with the story, I really like the pairings.

Hmm, for some reason I had always thought of the three friends with Hana being lesbian, Tohru being bi, and Uo being straight. But I guess that might be off a little. I'll go with your interpretation.

Doesn't Uo live with her dad?

Aw, I see love blossoming. I also like the parallelism between how Uo got close to Kyoko and Tohru, and how Uo's getting close to Kotone.

Aw, I love Kotone. I know exactly how she feels, except with me they're actually straight or taken.

E, so much cute awkwardness!

I love Hana's little daydream. It's so cute. She's so adorable. And I totally get looking into the future like that. It's fun.

Um, so, you're changing Hana's family a bit?

OMG! Her parents are Sakaki and Chiyo from Azumanga Daioh! Oh man, I love you! I'm working on a fanfic pairing those two together. I wanted to read some of those, but I don't think there are any. That just completely made my day! YAY! And by Chiyo's father you mean the dad-cat? Wow, you are my hero, as of today! ^_^

I love Shigure too! One of my friends once said that Shigure is the only man I've ever loved, and it might be true. I have a Shigure dog plushie I sleep with every night. :-P But I'm finding that as the series goes on, I'm liking him less. It's depressing. I liked him before we saw his incredibly cold side.

Haha, I love Shii's reaction. Other reason I love Shigure-he is very perceptive and can read people and situations really well. He just doesn't always use his power for good. WHich is funny. But of course he would notice Hana's feelings.

Aw, yay, Tohru has feelings too! And I love that Uo can tell. I bet everyone will know before Tohru does.

Aw, I like this Kotone. Funny how her dashing prince is a girl. Heheh.

Yay, I'm really liking this! ^_^

Yay! I love Hana x Tohru! I've never had the opportunity to read it, but I've always planned on writing it one day...

I'm surprised that the prince yuki club was so violent. I didn't think any of them had the guts.

I like how Uo figures it out and is just like "So, which one of us is going to do it?" Like it's some chore. Hana feels differently, of course.

Hahaha! I love the way Hana explains it. It's so like her to be completely blunt.

So, they're not explaining that it's a defensive strategy? Hmm, that probably will make it work better, but it sucks for Yuki and Kyo.

*sighs* Poor Hana. I really hope this ends up with Tohru returning the feelings, though I'm afraid it won't. Hana is definitely my favorite character though. And she's so obviously in love with Tohru. And Tohru has always struck me as someone who might be bisexual. So who knows? Anyway, very good start! I'll have to keep reading.

I like this story. can you please up date it? It seems belivable that saki is in love with Tohru because of how they act in the manga.

I really like your story. Please write more!

it saddens me that i can't go on and just read this whole ficlet. another wonderful chapter, and both the parents seem to fit perfectly.

hana and tohru make such a sweet couple.

to cute~ i forgot to review frist chapter so i'll review here... the part where ou shows up to scare away the pack or stupid "gang" girls was pretty darn kool... i'm weird... lols~... anywaays... onward to the next chapter

waah i thought this was a complete story at first please please please hurry i cant wait for the next chapter

i really really like it!! you dont see amny stories like this around much anymore, but this is by far one of the best i have ever had the pleasure of reading and I hope that you will write more soon!

this story is great! i love yuri!

i just had to ask.. did you use Sakaki and Chiyo from Azumanga Daioh?? well, i really do love their pairing.. i hope you continue your story even though its been months since you last updated.. i like it.