OH man, AWESOME! Really, really creepy too o.o I love it!!

Igh. *shivers*

Eek! Thats really creepy. But I just love reading it over and over again!

What a bastard. Protecting Remus is one thing, but forcibly keeping Sev alive, monstrous, and so very, very Dumbledore! I cheered when he died because, to me, he has always been the truly evil character.

This is sick and twisted and brilliant and SO COOL.

A certain line of Dumbledore's comes to mind: "I trust Severus Snape."

Pfft. Of COURSE he does!

Best line: James's memories of finding Remus digging a hole through Severus's chest were 'adjusted.' Brr-rr-rr.

VERY nicely done. :D

Ah...you did post this!

You know, I thought I had evil plotbunnies, but you know this one takes the biscuit...and half your fingers with it! ;o)

You're an excellent writer. This is an interesting idea, very nicely expressed.

Yo, this is clever! took me a minute to work it out but i laughed once i realized what it said, wont type it cause i dont wanna ruin it for others. clever word play *claps*

YOU! You must continue this! It's so fresh! So dark! You have the seedlings of a potential novel-sized fanfiction here. Sheer brilliance, I hope the Bunny continues to bug you till you write a proper ten chapters+

:D

Regards,
~Mizz Moony Luver

Very, very cool. Terrible and creepy, but cool none the less.

Horrible, and horribly pun-y ;-), I like it. The bunny wins indeed.

saludos
hele.

this is an excellent little horro short! Brilliant.

Very good!

Short, to the point, a little disturbing and intense. ^_^ Very interesting idea; it makes me want to read a whole fic based on it. If you end up making this a multi-chapted kind of thing, or a follow-up... make sure to get in touch. XD

Again, great job. ^_^

Oh my gog. Wow. That was.. brilliant. It'sd so good.. nothing to be said except.. more, please.

whoa... that was so unique, so dark and such different path to the answer of why snape hates Potters. I loved it! Normally I'd complain about the length but honestly, your fic is PERFECT

Happy writing,
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