i love this story and hope you continue the story

details...details details...I love details...for some reason most writters forget this and just go on with the story without explaining something and that is my biggest pet peeve. A good story can be ruined but lack of detail or to much detail...But you put the right balence in your story. I love it. Good work!

Excellent story. I added it to my Ren x Horo C2. ^.^

write more plz!

This is the first time I've ever read an AU after the point where I realised it was one. Your writing is very captivating and your re-invention of the characters is enough where I'm certain that if you were to invent your own, they would not fall short of enchanting. In short, superb! Marvelous! Spectacular! Please look at my SK story and review because I need more reviews so I can write more! (Unless you don't like HaoxLyserg and fluff.) Anyway, yours is stellar, no lie. Honest, or I wouldn't have read it so far. Ciao.

wonderful,


I do hope you will continue.

:D

Great story so far!

hope u update soon!

:3

8) I love it~! Not wapanese or displeasing in the least! I am definitely looking forward to the next update!

YOU UPDATED! YAY!

Have you ever read any books by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes? Your fic reminds me of them. That's awesome, because AAR is my favorite author (along with James Patterson).

Will you be updated soon and stuff? PLEASE SAY YES!

haha! you're right! it's been a while. :) well, i like the chapter and i believe you should continue. this is like,... the only shamnan king fic i read so,... yeah, please continue!!

bye!
-lugga

The story is very beautiful and very misterious to the little kawai Ainu *giggles*
but still is one of my favourites by now..
I can't wait for the next part.
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Hey hey hey you can't just start a good story and then stop it! Are you crazy...UPDATE!

Ah! =D You updated it! ^^ I've been a big fan of yours for a long time now, but I only somewhat recently got an account on this site. I'm really happy though, I totally love your Shaman King stories.