XD poor Lyude.

...yeah my review stinks... sorry.

finally the joke of Zosma tower has actually came into writing format XD I was thinking the exact thing (well about the blocks being pushed in and stuff) with it. This is great.

and... HAI THUR LIU. :3
This username should be very familiar to you XD

Wow, i liked this! And it was yaoi eh? I thought so...
I loved this! But I always wondered...
If the Guardian was in this...

-laughs- Kalas lives! And Gibari pushed him over the edge!
Poor Kalas, getting his ass kicked all the time...and fuck must be his favorite word huh?

Yeah, there is a lot of swearing in this chapter. I hope Kalas is going to be okay...

Kalas has VERY nice lanuage, I can tell. Too bad they didn't act like this in the game, it would be a lot cooler. Hey, where;s the Guardian Spirit? Or does he not have one? :(

Oh my gosh, this is so funny!

“Maybe you should start.” Kalas winked at the redhead. Lyude drew his eyebrows together in confusion.
“I don’t get it.” He said frowning. Kalas frowned as well. Gibari coughed awkwardly.

and even though i don't get that part, it's still funny! Keep on writing!

I was stuck on that fight for like three days. And it would've been so nice if you HAD been able to use all six of your characters instead of all three.

The drama nicely compliments the frustration that was that battle.

And... it was a little out of place considering the humorous nature of the story, but what the hell, nothing's wrong with a little melodrama here or there.

Ah, the wonder of not suspending your disbelief.

This, my friends, is what we call "video game logic".

Fun times indeed. And I'm loving the little implied Kalas/Lyude jokes.

The ending...so random... But just the sort of down to earth decision Savyna would make. Brilliant stuff, mate, from the bowl of soup, Lyude being thrown at Xelha (and about overanalysing things), Kalas killing people in the face to the pile of air. Genius in a pancake...well, a Magnus pancake.

Not so funny...

mkay.

*Pelts her with a toaster, a cat, a computer, A CD, a Turkey, and a shovel.

‘Dear fate, stop throwing shit at my head because it hurts like bloody fucking hell…and it hurts my feelings...

ROFL! not quite so funyn anymore, but it's still good.

That was awesoem!

“ Gibari! You….suck” Kalas said.

“Oh rly?”

“Ya rly.”

“Well then, I think you’re stupid.”

“Aww.” Kalas whined. Silence ensued.

“Let’s be friends”

“Yeah okay.”

LMAO! Ites getting even better! ROCK ON!