lol XDD i like it
DAM THAT STUPID GUY?
is karin and ichigo gonna be togethr? O-O not thats it wrong...
;D

this is realy good. You should continue this I would like to see what happens next. ;)

awesome continue I wanna see what happens next!

I like the theme, and I like the way you put the story together.

Awesome fanfic. You have managed to write such a dark story without sounding too cheesy. I can't wait to find out what happens next! XD

Oh PLEASE continue this!! It's a fantastic story!

i will be waiting for more chapters couse this is a subject close to my heart and something that i have lived very close to in the past you have done a very good job with it

I really like this fic! I hope that you update it again soon. :)

I like how you describe the way Karin is feeling. I also like that you don't put a lot of unnecessary bulk into the fic. A lot of people usually try to make it longer by using a lot of description that by the time you're finished reading through half the detail you're bored with the fic already!

I also like the way you describe Ichigo being worried about her. And I definitely agree that he would've known! He knows when something's up with his family, even if he tries to tell himself he's just imagining things or being paranoid.

I can see IchiKarin in this easily, for some reason, and I hope since you mentioned it was possible in the warnings that you do end up putting it in. :p

I also like how you described the villains. Karin feels something's up with the group of boys, but attributes it to her own unwarranted paranoia. And, for all outward appearances they don't look like sinister people. I like that, because it isn't always the ugly looking brutes that are the "bad guys" in real life. Sometimes, the nicest and most upstanding person you meet could be the worst nightmare you ever came across.

Wow! I made this really long! Sorry! I hope that you update soon!

Ja!

please update soon

sad sad sad, i really ont like this story yu should have just stopped at wat he was doin before but damn... just so yu know KARIN IS MY FAVORITE BLEACH 'FUCKIN' CHARACTER... ass hole

OMG PLZ UPFDATE ASAP

good read so far.can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow...just wow. Takai is..well, dead. Its one to piss of an older brother, its another thing to rape his sister, its a 3rd thing when said brother is Ichigo 'Bankai Wielding half insane Inner Hollow holding' Kurosaki.

..Oh yeah, he's screwed beyond belief.

Its an ok story so please update soon

i loved it!update soon plz~!