This was a great fanfic!
I really do hope you update it soon... but I don't really hold any illusions that that will happen.But doesn't it irk you a bit to end it on such a cliff hangar?

Great fic! What's a cliffhanger!
Please update soon.

Will Ikari get his orginal body back?
Please Update.

...I don't think you've updated this story in a very long time, but I thought I'd review anyway. (^_^) I thought that this was a great version of Arael's battle, 'cause I totally agree with you. I'm curious as to how this will continue though, did Unit 1 somehow manage to protect Shinji? Or will they have to replace his body again like Rei?
I'd love it if you'd post the next chapter soon, this fanfic is really promising and well written.
XD

Damn, that sucks for poor Shinji. I just hope he actually survived it, and you TOTALLY had the Lance tossed away.. again. Man, I'm still looking for a fic where they DON'T loose that thing. And what about 01's S2 engine? Shouldn't that be enough to like.. power it and stuff?

I know this is probably a forlon hope at this point but. please update this. This is an amazing story and it needs to be finished.

This was a very interesting premise and a believable one too. I could easily see something like this happening if Shinji had not been able to re-materialize like he did in the anime. I also like how you have developed the characters and the trials that Shinji had to go through as a result of his new appearance. The way that you have portrayed the growing relationship between Shinji and Rei was also well done. Shinji had changed quite a few aspects in Rei's life before being absorbed by Unit-01 and thus it is quite understandable to see the consternation that Rei felt as a result of loosing Shinji's presence and the her struggle with the new feelings that she was experiencing. This has been quite an entertaining read so far and I can't wait to see what exactly has happened to Shinji as a result of his fall. I can only hope that it isn't anything too drastic since I would hate to see all the progress that has taking place regarding Shinji's and Rei's relationship go to waste.

I've just read through the whole thing, and it's two thirty in the morning. I've gotta say, I absolutely love this story. And I agree on the battle in the anime seeming like a bit of a cop-out.

Anyway, no real criticism here. Just wanted to drop in and say that I've enjoyed the fic so far, and I'm eager to see the next chapter. Thanks for sharing the story here.

Update ;_;

Fantastic- I just got finished reading through what you have written here, and I must say that it would be a shame to see it dead in the water.

This was easily the best fic I've read in two years or so. Bravo- I have no criticism, only mindless gushing over how incredibly awesome this story is.

I just took a look at your profile- I'm relieved to see that you are in the process of writing chapter 10. I eagerly await its release.

Thanks for writing this- I certainly enjoyed reading it. :)

I bet we'll meet Shinji generation II in the next chapter! Whatever else you may say about having an aquarium full of replacement bodies, it sure is handy when you kinda sorta can't avoid dying, isn't it? XD

Awesome fic! One of the best eva fic in the whole damn site, and I'm glad you mentioned that this hasn't been abandoned. Would've been really sad. Anyway, waiting eagerly for your update. Thanks from writing this great fic! Made my night!

An excellent story!

I read all the way through, closed it and re-opened. >.>

Such an amazing piece of Eva work. You don't have Rei become almost bi-polar and that end Angel fight...a work of beauty!

Keep it up!

Regards
SA

Excellent work. I am intrigued by your concept of turning Shinji into sort of a male Rei. I'm not even going to guess at what they did to give Shinji his new body (at least that's what I think happened). Good stuff.

I've really been enjoying the read to this point, but I think in this chapter you really lost focus, pushing beyond the limits of my suspension of disbelief.

The characters acting differently I can accept based on the new situation, but why in the world is the angel acting differently?

Beyond this, the fight is just too darned long. I would have preferred it if you left out Asuka and Rei's round two involvement and cut straight to the mid-air battle instead.

...DAH! UPDATE!