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| JackSpicer 2006-12-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery cute. I love it. You should write more. I didn't check to see when you last updated. But this is really good and I think you should continue. |
| Random Projects 2006-10-23 ch 2,  | abuseit's really cute... poor Jack, with neglective parents. Hope you update soon! |
| Narcotic Dollie 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseSquay! Verra cute! I liked the way you expressed Jack's scardness. I could almost feel it. Please write more soon. --Dollie |
| dendraica 2006-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that was AWESOME! I love the way you write and your description. Aww, poor Jack was too scared to even scream. Love Rai's cheekiness, it's so HIM. This is very in character and that triples the awesome. Shame you don't have more reviews. ;_; I'd love it if you wrote more stories! |
| Goddess of Yaoi 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseInteresting start. I especially like the ending. I look forward to see where you're going with this piece. |
| crystalas 2006-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abusebrillaint! |