loved the story

I loved this, you did an amazing job with it.

nice

I loved your story. It was really inspireing. Do you mind if i use a little twist of the plot in story i am writing. It isnt going to be about a girl from the future or man eating islands, but i liked the way you portriated Brandi. (excuse my spelling). ;) cant wiat for the next story.

I loved this story, and even though Brandi was a little Mary-Sue. I loved it. If she wasn't the story wouldn't have been as good. I can't wait for the sequel. Although, I fear when you say drama between Jack & Brandi. I hope they don't break-up, they have been through too much. Unless by drama, you mean pregnancy. Because, those too are at it a lot, lol. Well, post the sequel soon. I am VERY excited.

Do I sense tension building up between Jack & Brandi? That doesn't sound too good. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I woke up this morning to three new chapters, and I loved it! When Jack told Brandi to go back to her mom, I was sad, but happy again because Jack came with her, and then they were back on 'The Black Pearl'. Please update again this weekend!

Oh no! What's Norrington gonna say? I can't wait, update soon! I hope you find your pet.

You need to update, I went one whole day without one. Hope one comes today!

You have to update. It's getting too good!

Great update, and very cute. Does Jack even remember he said 'I love you', to Brandi? She should say it back to him. Please update quickly!

You have to update, like again today! This is too good.

You have to update. It's getting better and better!

Great chapter update. What happen to chapters 8-11?

Oh, my god. I love this story. Please update again, and fast!