'Coils of the Serpent' sounds good UPDATE SOON!

This story totally ruins what Sailor Moon represents. It's excentlly written but why would anyone want that to happen?

Interesting pretense. Great imagery, great story.

whoa. darn/ i thought it was gonna be a serena/darien and inner scouts/four generals pairings... _

Awesome story! I hope you write some more to it!

Wow. Very interesting! Please keep writing; I want to know what happens!

Don't stop now!

Kami-sama, that is a really good story, I liked all the imagery and symbolism. You really must finish this, it's like a masterpeice. Good Job.

off to a good start! please continue!

that was intresing... I liked it! Write more soon!

omg that was great

ooooo! This is reeeeeally good! I love it! Hurry up and write! _ Ja ne!

you have to continue with this.. this is soo cool!