had to give you an extra thanx for making it in the first place cause it's nothing like i read before in this book section.

sounds really damn interesting and keep up with the twists and the neat sweets

nice man it's a pretty cool story and thanx for making it super long...er...est as poxxible.

great comebacks and for giving wonka a panic attack because he hardly gets sick...
thanx for the hilarious story.

wow...nice chapies.

nice chase by the way. remind me of me and my other sister when we play tag in the high school cafeteria. it was blasted fun trying to outrun the jrotc.

i managed to get safe base onece i get in the library because once you get in the library ...you can't leave till the bell rings...so you can se that the jrotc won't enter the library...extra bonus that my sister is in jrotc cause she taught me what areas to avoid, tricks i'll be expecting and most of all how to get into the building. there is a small hole in the building that leads directly to the girls restroom.

they closed during nutritution and lunch but the library open at thosse times...
it was a pain in the ** to know that the restrom doors where locked except the small windows. makes me damn glad that i;m incredible small for my age...for an 17 year old that's under 5ft.
had might fun to ujust use a small thin metal ruler as a screw driver or sometimes using a dime or penny to open the air thingy...
anyways just blabbing...that's what it remind me of.


thanx for the story.

nice with the blackmail and acceptiing the fact the men are isane but wonka is the definiton of the insanity happily genius...
thanks for making have lots of smiles and laugh even thought my brother keep telling me to wipe my big grin off my face i keep unnearving him. told him to read this story and he finds it funny too. he'll wantto use some of the insults or funny teaser to his candiatic buddies.

it's great. makes me want to read the story over again.
my brother, erick saying that it the sort of thing he would do and the girl had manage to help the candy devil by the tracking powder.
we sincerly thanx ya for the long and great chapter you made on this one especailly this chapter
made me bust a lung and the tiles...

hm recycle...and reduce gas emmission...my parent got a hybrid and i onlly use a scooter to get to college. very awsome i fixed it up and airbrushed it to my sort of style. got dog paws and it's a redand greenish scooter

the us actually signed that treaty...?
i think it's the whole majority that ignore it or don't know it but at least the miniority are doing something about it because they are the one that get affectedx by it.

whachawonka doing with the outburst of addicting candies...
?
thanx again for the incredible awsome story!!1

ouch man...gave her something she fears of what she said to the candy fellow...explains why she drastically said no.
tahnx for the inveiw
thanx for working ** this chapter,too.

ya gonna make wonka work hard to get the stubbern and hurt girl right. that will be awsome because that witl show he was damn serious. not a thing to say out of nowherre...well not out of nowhere but a short time..
thanx fore the amazing story
thanx

wha...! you shot him down like as a little kid...
thanx for multiple climax and the exciting story you kept making.

as i was saying befor i got cut off accidently...you made doreit seem like she belong to the story or that you're just that good at writing and provoking many smiles and giggles.
my brother next to me says he likes it too.

cool...and nice tricky with the sword cane and the papparrazi thing...
doesn't matter if the character don't belong to the book..
you

hahaha you made an edible tracking powder and that is a genuis idea.
you're a really great author, man.
tahnx dorthe awzome story.