Reviews for Magician of Genius

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chrysanne 2008-08-10 ch 1,	abuseOh my Lord I finally found this one again!! Thank goodness you're still updating. Kudos on such a fine story, I must've read it at least three times. Here's to another! :D
PhantomPenguin 2008-08-06 ch 36,	abuseI really like this ^_^ It's so rare that you find an entrancing and well-written story such as this. There are so many other Wonka/OC stories that are lacking in so many ways. However, I love yours! It's amazing how well you depict Willy Wonka; you take all of his peculiar mannerisms and depict them perfectly in your story. Also, Doreit is a character that has many layers (like an onion..insert Shrek reference...sorry :p). I love that you have created a character that is just utterly believable. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that your story is amazing! Your writing style is simply superb, too! The amount of detail you go into leaves me amazed (and happy..there's more to read ^_^). ~PhantomPenguin
Belle07 2008-07-30 ch 36,	abuseheehee, love sick fools,lol keep writing
Everto Tonsor 2008-07-29 ch 36, anon.	abuseYay! You've finally updated! I really liked the conversation about Wonka being...Wonka. And the image of Wonka dancing with a crab on his head surrounded by oompa loompas cracked me up! Good job, and I can't wait for your next installment.
Yva J. 2008-07-29 ch 36,	abuseLovely idea with the raining gumdrops and then the chocolate. I loved the gooey chocolate bit, and Willy's reluctance to join in. I know that this story is really good, but I hope that you will have some new plot twists for us here soon. The ideas are good, and I like them getting along like this, but something's gotta come up here. :) The different places in the factory are neat, though, you have a lot of nice ideas here. It is nice to see you back, hope all is weill in your corner of the world. Looking forward to more. ~Yva
ThereAre666Ways2Love 2008-07-28 ch 36,	abuseAw, things are heating up with Doreit and Willy, I think lol. I was totally drinking lemonade while reading about them swimming in it lol. This was great, can't wait for more!
Music is my Muse 2008-07-28 ch 36,	abuseWow, she finally had chocolate! M is Willa going to be a problem in the future? Like, is she gonna go crazy and start breaking things? That'd be entertaining to read... Anywho, great chapter; eagerly waiting for the next. Cheers Music is my Muse
JeanieBeanie33 2008-07-28 ch 36,	abusei love how Doreit can always be herself around Wonka. I'm just wishing she would quit modeling for good! And that song, All I Want Is You, is absolutely perfect for this chapter! For Wonka and Doreit period. Other than Billy Joel songs of course. :))
minorly-crazy 2008-06-23 ch 35,	abusemy goodness i love your story and cant wait for an update (its odd how that rhymed isnt it lol) lots o' luv M-C
ThereAre666Ways2Love 2008-03-24 ch 35,	abuseI am loving this story! You are such a good writer and you are excellent with detail. Each scene I read is practically playing in my head like a movie! This is great, can't wait for more!
xdanishxpastryx 2008-03-10 ch 35,	abuseI recently found this story and I LOVE it! Keep up the good work!
still dirrty 2008-03-10 ch 35,	abuseLovely chapter! They are hilariously cute together. More please :D :D!
Belle07 2008-03-10 ch 35,	abusehehee, she's falling for him. keep writing
Yva J. 2008-03-10 ch 35,	abuseIt's nice to see you back with a new chapter. It was interesting to read about their little excoursions around the factory. I love all the little creative places that you write about here. Makes me wish I could go there and do some exploring myself. At any rate, I was glad to see that you touched on the issue of her starving herself again, if but only briefly. I think the last line of the chapter really summed a great deal up here. She did make a choice, and it was nice to read that she acknowledged it instead of having Willy 'make it for her'. Of course, there were parts where I felt Willy was being a bit condescending and controlling. If their relationship / marriage is going to work, he's going to have to lighten up on that because most women won't put up with it. ;) I am still waiting for the moment that she will tell him that she loves him. I know that she married him, but it just feels to me to be an equally important bit for her to acknowledge. I think she does, but admitting it is a big step. I saw her do some growing in this chapter and liked the part about her acknowledging the fact that they should be on equal footing here. I guess being married, I can see something that really outlines the idea of what a sucessful marriage is like. This chapter gave me hope that this particular couple will not be throwing in the towel here, but still I like that you outline that neither of them are perfect. A lot of writers fall into the trap of writing perfect characters with no flaws. You give them a very human essence, which I think is good. Anyway, nice to see you back, and thanks for the nice long chapter. I am thoroughly enjoying this, but you already know that. Hope to read from you again soon. :) Here's hoping you can find the time to give my new story a looksie. :D Till then, I'll wait for the next update here.
JeanieBeanie33 2008-03-09 ch 35,	abuseSchweetness! I would kill for a vacation/honeymoon like that: exploring Willy Wonka's chocolate factory! I love how you just keep coming up with all these totally awesome ideas. It's like you've been there. Lemonade Lake? Totally Willy Wonka!

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