Reviews for The Witching Hour

Reviews For: The Witching Hour

bstant 2006-09-13 ch 3,	abuseNot sure if you realized but at the beginning of this chapter you said grandnephew, instead of grandson. update soon.
Ayana Starman 2006-09-13 ch 3,	abusevery interesting...update soon
Stylin'Fire 2006-09-13 ch 3,	abuseI'm confused...Update soon please
Stylin'Fire 2006-09-10 ch 2,	abuseI have been checking everyday to see if you had updated...and you did! YAY! Okay, I was wondering if you would have a bit more Chris/Bianca in the next chapter...or do they not know each other yet? Well, can't wait for your next update! GREAT JOB!
Ayana Starman 2006-09-10 ch 2,	abusegreat story update soon...cant wait to see the chrisbianca
Stylin'Fire 2006-09-04 ch 1,	abuseLOVE IT! It is really hard to find good Chris/Bianca stories (or stories with Bianca even in them...) I love it and I hope that you update REALLY SOON!
moirariordan 2006-09-02 ch 1,	abuseWow, intense. You definitely have my attention. The ghost at the end has me a bit confused, I couldn't tell who it was at first, I'll have to go back and re-read it. But I'm assuming that you meant Virgina Calloway as part of Richard Montana's family feud? Hum. Still a little confused. But I'll certainly keep reading, hopefully the next chapter will clear it up. One thing--you might want to check your quotation marks, some of them are missing and it's kind of hard to tell when a character stops and starts speaking. Also you've got spaces in-between punctuation marks when you shouldn't (example: " Were you showing me what you see, what you feel ? " should be: "Were you showing me what you see, what you feel?"). You've got an amazing start, but my advice would be to get a beta to proofread your story, maybe catch the little grammar and spelling mistakes to polish it up a little. :) Great start. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. -MR
Ayana Starman 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abusecant wait for chrisbianca, update soon

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