I like the angst, and I like the religious undertones. You have excellent grammar and revision skills. You have written this one chapter so well it could be a one-shot.

Sad, but beautiful.

That was truly beautiful.

That was a really beautiful piece. Am imedetly adding this to favs. GO YOU!

The poem you wrote was genius. It went perfectly with the story. This is probably one of the best written fanfics I have ever read.

That...was...so beautiful, it's amazingly perfect. I love it!! So perfect...

Very nice, I liked it. Coulda done with some more Pyro, after all, that is what I read a fic for...lol, just kidding. For being nearly Pyro-less, it was still a great fic! Good job!

This story was awesome; I just loved it. You're a very talented writer. Keep up the good work and update soon!

What is it with your fics and making me tear up?!
-sniffle-

"He had laughed too, with her. Told her he was only pulling her leg. Maybe, maybe… there could have been dejection in his laughter. But she couldn’t remember, really.

“I think I’ve fallen in love with you, Marie.”

I seriously went,
"Aww.." at that part..
The way she thought about Scott, Jean, The Phoenix, Xavier and especially John seriously made me feel like I was gonna cry..
And, seriously, I haven't cried in like a year..
It was just such a beautiful fic.
Originally I wasn' gonna ramble so much and just say,
"Wow...I luvd it! Awesome Job."
But, I liked it too much not to leave an uber long review..
Incredible Fic..
;)

Beautiful! Churches are an unique place in Earth, were sometimes you can have a glimpse of heaven. I liked how you wrote of candles and flames. It was very spiritual, like if John was redeemed of all his sin. The light and the darkness. Rogue and Pyro. I almost cried with Rogue while reading this short story.

And Rogue seeking the heat of the candles. *Sighs*

"I think I've fallen in love with you, Marie." That was breathtaking. I would have love to see that in the movie.

It was nice to bring Nightcrawler too. I was so sad when he didn't show up in the last movie.

Truly beautiful! ¡Qué la Fuerza te acompañe! :D. Jade

::bows down to the Queen of Angst::

Beautiful, but so sad. Really don't know what to say. I could see it playing out in my mind perfectly; great imagery. And I didn't even have to squint. :sob: