Reviews for Our Long Goodbye

Reviews For: Our Long Goodbye

Itachi's aprentice 2007-09-18 ch 1,	abuseWell good written but too me it's just too frigging sad.
RiseInFlamesMichael 2007-01-19 ch 1,	abuseWow, I'm starting to cry. SOBS T_T
da archer 2006-11-28 ch 1,	abuseo..m..g...this was so good!! but so sad... ben
KUNAI SHOT 2006-11-26 ch 1,	abuseI read this when i am sad and play the song at the same time. This makes me cry each time i read it. I can never really find a good naruto death story but this is the first best one i have found. You should make more in ur spare time.^-^= T-T
Jessie 2006-11-24 ch 1, anon.	abusei don't like to review after reading a fic but this one was really good.i almost cried while i was reading it.i hope i can find a nother 1 as well writen as this 1!
HyuugaFylara 2006-11-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMK that was so sad! Nice story, but so sad! Naruto's so dense! But, it's a good story, but sad! Okay, I've said enough.
Altrict 2006-10-04 ch 1,	abuseWow... Now I just hate my code... I have to read every fic to the end and review it and now I want to take this back... I should have stopped the moment I saw Tragedy... Well it doesn't make a difference! I will review like any good reviewer should! First off, great job with the flow! Amazing really! I can't get my chapters flowing but you did a very good job with it. Details details. I have to say I'm impressed! There were quite a lot of small details that I would have missed if I wasn't reading it carefully. Only one thing... I hate angst or tragedy... I know I might be contradicting on some points but I hate it... I can write it. I just can't read it. Weird huh? Still your fic was good enough that I overlooked the tragedy... Almost... not quite... Ok! Do you want a confession or something?! I felt sad! I teared up a little... I feel like a wussy... PS: I not really angry... Just a little sad.
AmeliaGentlefist 2006-09-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseim crying all over my keyboard! its so sad!
no one in particular 2006-09-03 ch 1, anon.	abusedude! sniff man...that was sad, man... all i can say is... MAKE F*IN MORE!
JC-zala 2006-09-03 ch 1,	abuseThat was incredible. The way you've written it is so good and it made my heart so sad. Good job.
Mystical-Dreamer57 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abuseThat was so sad! I loved it! Please do more!
-just a random person- 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abuseOMG! OH! I loved it! I loved the how the narration changed from omnicient to naruto's point of view, I loved how everyone acts, I love that Naruto knew she loved him, I love EVERYTHING, even the factb that I'm going to start crying any second now! -sniffsniff- here it comes...ok, now I'm crying. OMG! I realy hope naruto doesnt (commit suicide -gasp!-) though that would be very dramatic and rather sweet. I cant believe you only have three reviews. Nasty little non reviewing buggers. Ok, if you like the kind of one shots where people well...die in the end, and are very romantic, then you should check out my friend's stories. Not all of them have death as a result but all of them are romance and naruto. Her name is Danigirl101...er I think. She's on my fav. author's list, but she's the only naruto writter I have. any way, your story just reminded me of her style, that's actually why I read it. sorry this is so frekin' long. Luv ya! Morgan
BigQuise 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abusethis so ruined my good day. damn tragedes
Maned Wolf Goddess 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abuseTHATS WAS SAD I ACTUALLY CRIED cries
AccentFetish 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abuseAw, so sad T-T

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