:) keep up the good work with this story

Are you going to make another chapter for this? If so... YAY! It's great so far. The thought of them on the bed talking is so cute!

You should try to continue this, its so good! I lovez Zack...

I love this story, PLEAZE oh PRETTY PLEAZ WITH SUGAR ON TOP CONTINUE, it's so god. I enjoy ZackxAerith, favourite couple of all time but I really like ZackxAerisxCloud. UPDATE!UPDATE UOPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEAZ!!

Great story! Can't wait for the update. I get the feeling that Zack has everything already planned in his head... I want to see what Aeris' reaction will be to the story of Hojo...

this great story so far pleaz write more soon

Never tried the ZackAerisCloud, but I think I could really like it. ^^; Not the biggest Aeris fan, leaning more toward the ZackCloud or SephCloud or hell, even SephZackCloud. However, I do think I could like this one...so, enough of my pointless ramblings...continuation yes?

You know, I've even read a SephZackAerisCloud! o.o It was really good...okay, I'm done, I swear. Again, continuation yes?

This was a really great, eye catching start for a fic! I like how you brought our favorite characters together so seamlessly and believably In fact, I like it so much that I want you to continue this fic and won't take no for an answer, you hear?

So where are you going from here? How will they become mercenaries? Will they join with Avalanche? What about Seph? Is this going to be canon to the game or AU somewhat? I like that you decided to let Zack live. He's great, isn't he? And what about Cloud? He was mako poisoned, right? Did his concern for Zack heal him that fast, or is he still going to go through some weakness or disorientation from it? Obviously he's going to have mako glowing eyes and probably some kind of enhanced strength, right? Right?

Can't wait for your next update, so keep 'em coming, kay? Do that, and I promise to keep on reviewing!! ^_^

ooh... cute... ^^ *grins* Suteki! ^^ *grins* Whee! ^^ Update soon?

Awesome! Can't wait for more chapters!

Oh! Zack!

I just watched Last Order this weekend, so this fic makes me uber happy.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

T-T that's how it should have happened! ...or ...at least, something like that. >.>

Very interesting so far! It'll be fun to see how things turn out. Are they going to run into AVALANCHE? That could make things complicated if they run into Tifa.

Please write more soon!

Great story line... I hope there is more to come.

Cool story, update soon! ^^