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faiyaryuu
2008-11-01 . chapter 1
:) keep up the good work with this story
Shiva-iceflame
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
Are you going to make another chapter for this? If so... YAY! It's great so far. The thought of them on the bed talking is so cute!
Shirosenshi Kisetsu 116
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
You should try to continue this, its so good! I lovez Zack...
GoldenGirl
2008-03-29 . chapter 1
I love this story, PLEAZE oh PRETTY PLEAZ WITH SUGAR ON TOP CONTINUE, it's so god. I enjoy ZackxAerith, favourite couple of all time but I really like ZackxAerisxCloud. UPDATE!UPDATE UOPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEAZ!!
Nanashi-Angel
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Great story! Can't wait for the update. I get the feeling that Zack has everything already planned in his head... I want to see what Aeris' reaction will be to the story of Hojo...
Hunter Hatake and Neko Uchiha
2007-04-27 . chapter 1
this great story so far pleaz write more soon
WhiteWolfCub
2007-02-10 . chapter 1
Never tried the ZackAerisCloud, but I think I could really like it. ^^; Not the biggest Aeris fan, leaning more toward the ZackCloud or SephCloud or hell, even SephZackCloud. However, I do think I could like this one...so, enough of my pointless ramblings...continuation yes?

You know, I've even read a SephZackAerisCloud! o.o It was really good...okay, I'm done, I swear. Again, continuation yes?
kazuhiko
2006-12-22 . chapter 1
This was a really great, eye catching start for a fic! I like how you brought our favorite characters together so seamlessly and believably In fact, I like it so much that I want you to continue this fic and won't take no for an answer, you hear?

So where are you going from here? How will they become mercenaries? Will they join with Avalanche? What about Seph? Is this going to be canon to the game or AU somewhat? I like that you decided to let Zack live. He's great, isn't he? And what about Cloud? He was mako poisoned, right? Did his concern for Zack heal him that fast, or is he still going to go through some weakness or disorientation from it? Obviously he's going to have mako glowing eyes and probably some kind of enhanced strength, right? Right?

Can't wait for your next update, so keep 'em coming, kay? Do that, and I promise to keep on reviewing!! ^_^
hittocerebattosai
2006-12-07 . chapter 1
ooh... cute... ^^ *grins* Suteki! ^^ *grins* Whee! ^^ Update soon?
UberSecretNinja
2006-09-27 . chapter 1
Awesome! Can't wait for more chapters!
Child of a Pineapple
2006-09-05 . chapter 1
Oh! Zack!

I just watched Last Order this weekend, so this fic makes me uber happy.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
lady of love
2006-09-04 . chapter 1
T-T that's how it should have happened! ...or ...at least, something like that. >.>
The Invisible Fan
2006-09-03 . chapter 1
Very interesting so far! It'll be fun to see how things turn out. Are they going to run into AVALANCHE? That could make things complicated if they run into Tifa.

Please write more soon!
Skie
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
Great story line... I hope there is more to come.
White Illusion
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
Cool story, update soon! ^^
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