A great story of how Luke came into the Lars's hands. Candie, you just keep on stunning me! ;-)

'Twas very good, Candie K. I always thought Owen was an old fuddy-duddy. (did I just say 'fuddy-duddy'? I need professional help.)

I have no doubt we will see something like this in one of the upcoming films. You handled this well and nailed Owen and his prickly nature all too well. Perhaps you could write another story explaining his feelings and why he is so crabby. i would love to read it. Great writing.

I always thought that it was Beru's idea to keep Luke. She was the only one who seemed to care about him. Owen just always seemed crabby about anything. Somebody could have given Owen Lars a million credits and that guy would have found some reason to be crabby about it. You captured Beru's love for Luke perfectly.

That was surprisingly good, keep up the excellent work.

A nice little tidbit. Great insight.

Aww. Poor Obi. Poor Padme. Poor Luke. Good Author. Could we please have another story in this time line? Pretty please?

I like it. Owen's reaction is perfect - he always seemed impatient and a bit gruff towards Luke in Ep. 4