Excellent story!!

Well, since I enjoyed Hero so much, I decided to review another one of your fics, and I must say, I am impressed. I thought this story was going to be some stupid cliche with Kagome becoming uber powerful and InuPapa falling in love with her. Instead, you've changed the circumstances quite a bit. Kagome is a little eight year-old, so naive, so vulnerable after her father's death,InuPapa is dying, no doubt from the fight with Ryukotsusei. I like how you have made it a prequel and I think, maybe, this could actually have happened as fate's way of preparing Kagome for the troubles that would inevitably happen in the future.

As for your idea of editing Hero... well, this is only my opinion but, yes you can flesh the training in the rain scene out, because it's up to you to make your stories as best as you can make them. But if all else fails, I would keep an original unedited version of the story, in case the expanding didn't turn out the way you wanted it to. It sasy you uploaded that story some years ago, so who knows? Your style could definuitely have changed.

Well, I've rambled on enough here. Bye!

Very emotional, Its so cute! ^_^

*glomps* Inu-no-Taisho is one of my favorite characters in Inuyasha! This is a wonderful story. Thanks!

Lilz

Bravo! Bravo!

This truly has a great start, dont forget to update! :D

Aw...this is so adorable, sad, and comforting. It's like some kind of WAFF story, isn't it? ^_^

And I'm glad Inupapa's in it.

This story was very well-written.

Bye for now,

Rikako

This is a wonderful,touching story. Inupapa's characterization is excellent and so is young Kagome's. The person you wrote this for sure is lucky.

Wow. Your a great writer. o.o That was amazing! I loved it! It was sad, but the true about death. I loved the fact Inu no Taisho was in it too! ^_^

Wow... what an awesome take on this 'pairing'! Thank you very much.

It was sad and vary hopefull. It made me cry andI am still crying for the 3 people that I know that have gone.

aw very cute!

*Sniffle* Shame on you, you made me cry... ;_;

Beautiful story! I give you a 100 out of 10! ^__^

You did an awesome job with Kagome and her sorrow over her Dad but trying to be strong. I especially liked "She was starting to get tired of crying."

I also enhjoyed the Sess/Rin reference (I assume it was Sess/Rin?).