That was pretty awesome. Very well written and I absolutely LOVED all the arguments and the characterizations of the boys. "That's not a rule, you idiot." "What happened to what we practiced?" Hilarious! And great the way Remus freaked out and told them to run and they decided to go see him. Great story.

Don't want the leather shoe, though - I'm a vegetarian.

It wasn't that bad, way better than what I could of written.

Aww very sweet. I like it :)

I really do love this. You conveyed their feelings wonderfully, and it is very descriptive. I could see most of the scenes very clearly in my mind. Great job!

I love this oneshot! Keep up the good work!

This ones getting a big, long, lit essay style review. just because. i wouldn't have the guts to do this normally, but you seem not to mind my reviews, or be too offended at my occasional critisisms and stuff:

hokay. Beginning. Starts off a bit akwardly, especially james and sirius's first conversation. Which sounds a bit like you're sort of getting all the pieces into position for the story. it's believable, just a bit...dry. Like stage setting.

Then it gets into it a bit more, with those wonderful marauder-dialogues that you are so good at. The characters fill out a bit more. The next few sections of dialogue are great and remus's remidial potions excuse is wonderful.

Sirius/James marauder dialogue. Round about here the story settles down proper and is really good. Serously, the marauder dialogue you write is amazing, and the banter between sirius and james is so funny. Very realistic too.

Enter peter. I get the feeling you're still not completely happy with your peter. He's a tricky one to write. His characterisation is still a little awkward in this, but its a lot better than most other peters. And he keeps queit most of the time, which means he doesn't come accross as OOC, just a little unsure.

Marauders watching Remus turn into a werewolf. Wonderfully written but a little dodgy plot wise. Mind you, the canon is dodgy plot-wise as well. Dumbledore seems not to mind that nobody appears to be watching or looking after remus while he does his whole werewolf thing.

mauraders thinking. This part is short, but great. ''Bloody hell Remus, he thought, and I thought I had it bad.''-wonderful. I always feel sorry for the marauders, all fighting there own personal demons. They're such great characters to play arround with.

Ending-great. Really nice, very believable and peter is not bad in this bit either.

Overall great story. This is a special Lit. review for getting the POTC referance in 'troy.' :)

Ooh! Ooh! Tim-Tams!! -Checks the date you uploaded this- Damn. It was a year ago.

Yes. 12-yr-old boys can not be discreet.

Ow, how cute? Well written and nice.
But, I don't want a brown leather shoe! I WANT A BLUE ONE! :C

Aww! I like this one!

Is his problem a Hamster?

I'll take a Tim Tam thanks!
*eats tim tam*
Nice story
very nice
I liked it
I love Maruaders Stories...
I love James, Sirius, and Peter finding out about Remus stories, and first time they met stories too!
They're the best!
:D
~X'andirth~

nice little one shot very well written

Love It So Much

that was funtastical. Forget the fact that i've already read it before, but it was great to see it all in one go! the shoe sounds nice.

I just love it! Don't you think of writing a sequel?