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StorySmall 2/3/12 . chapter 2
I heard about this story in a Youtube video. I read the first two chapters, and I am now hooked! I love the descriptive writing style and the great choice of charecters. Very nice, now I'm on to chapter 3!
XxNightCoreIIxX 7/29/11 . chapter 8
Monkey fist:D haha that actually sounds like something he would o
Were-Weasel 2/24/11 . chapter 10
OMGOMGOMG! This story is totaly AMAZING! You alter the lines and actions JUST RIGHT it's totaly amazing to read something as good as this. PLZ continue!

P.S. I like Monty could you possibly squeeze a battle scene with him in it? Thank you!
Ninja Master 8/16/10 . chapter 3
Another great ch!
Ninja Master 8/13/10 . chapter 2
Up date this one day. Savvy!
Ninja Master 8/13/10 . chapter 1
I think Ron would make a better Jack than Will but thats just me. Great crossover by the way, Savvy!
FlyingSquirrel2010 3/26/09 . chapter 10
great story

luv it

update soon
reader 8/10/08 . chapter 10
nice update. keeping it to close to the movie still isn't bad but just becareful. update soon
Arya MageFire 8/5/08 . chapter 10
Yay! UPDATES! FINALLY!

*eh-hem*

sorry, done with the all-caps now.

Awesome chappie! I really love it!
Cylon One 8/4/08 . chapter 10
POTC and Kim Possible together like this will never lose its coolness and my interest.

Has this question ever been asked: Is there a chance there will be the hopefully expected two sequels to Possibles of The Caribbean?
CajunBear73 8/4/08 . chapter 10
Looks like a large caravan of seagoing Possibles about to search for Kimberly, and Josh too. Its just that Josh's idea may not hold water.

But Ron has struck an accord with Sparrow and is about to join in the search where the pirate knows she will be going.

Something about the name Stoppable is known to Sparrow, but not yet to Ron. He'll probably learn just after Kim does?

See ya soon.

CB73
daywalkr82 8/4/08 . chapter 10
Glad to see you're taking a little creative initiative here with Anne. The exchange between Ron and Jack was a little off, but it still retained its charm. I can only hope you won't change the marriage scene.
Josh84 8/4/08 . chapter 10
So, Mrs. Possible's joining the search for her daughter. It seems she can be quite persuasive.

And the twins plan to stowaway... and Zita has no idea. The poor girl is going to be an emotional wreck with all she's going through.

Meanwhile, Ron has formed an alliance with Jack and they'll soon be off to rescue... or at least Ron is.

Errors I noticed:

1) He quickly lowered his voice as he continued. "I didn't ( ) hear to listen to old wives' tales, Sparrow. Where did it go?" - missing word.

2) ...ignoring the question as he "longed" back in his cell once more. - mispelled?

Awesome chapter! Worth the wait. Looking forward to the next one.
Invader Johnny 8/4/08 . chapter 10
Well I'll be, this fic is back!

Heh, you are certanly getting your own storyline in progres instead of following the movie and THAT kicks ass!

I honestly didn't see THAT coming and I mean Lady Possible#s decission.

I did however saw the Twin's decision coming, they can be quite predictable huh?

Now then I wonder what is Kim gonna learn?

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Marcus S. Lazarus 6/17/08 . chapter 9
Well, I DO wish you were writing the story a bit faster, but what you've written is always so good that it helps to make up for how long it's taking.

If nothing else, the concept of the 'Kim Possible' cast participating in the events of 'PotC' alone is brilliant; you perfectly insert Kim and Ron into the lives of Will and Elizabeth without changing their characters, and your inclusion of the Tweebs and Anne is done very well without altering the central plot of the story too much.

On that topic, the new cast for the pirates works equally well. Having Pintel and Ragetti's 'equivalents' on this new crew being Drakken and Frugal Lucre in particular wins you some significant points, and the addition of Shego to the crew seems PARTICULARLY intriguing so far; does she still have her powers?

However, in the end, the best part about the story is a simple one; you've kept Captain Jack in the story.

After all, you can change SOME of the characters, but a 'PotC' story without Jack himself just does NOT work; good to see that you recognised it.

If nothing else, it might be interesting to see how he and Kim interact when they finally meet; should be rather amusing to see, if nothing else.

Plus, your writing style is BRILLIANT; so far you've managed to EXPERTLY capture even the fine details of the confrontations between the 'Black Pearl's' crew and the rest of the characters, to say nothing of the amount of detail you put into writing the fight between Ron and Jack.

All in all, apart from the previously-mentioned comment about the long time between chapters, I only have one flaw with this story; Rufus being a donkey in this reality limits the amount of help he might be able to offer during the crisis.

Still, I guess we'll just have to wait and see how things go from here; witnessing what happens when the other pirates learn about 'Hego's' real identity alone makes me PARTICULARLY eager to see what happens next.

Update soon!
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