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Revius
2009-10-19 . chapter 13
GET THAT CHAPTER FAST AS HELL OR I MAKE YOU! pls... I realy need to read more of this fast.
Lord Darken
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
As much as I hat it, It seem's another great fanfic
has died. Seing as you havnt made an update in TWO FRIGGIN YEARS!
Gravity The Wizard
2009-06-06 . chapter 13
Please Continue!
TrueViolence
2008-11-19 . chapter 13
awesome! i finished the last chapter and almost pulled my hair out that there weren't any more chapters! i am hanging on the edge of my seat for the next one!

HANYOU LOVE ALL THE WAY!
Ikasury
2008-10-17 . chapter 13
lol i find this again with the distinct feeling of 'didn't i read this before?' and sure enough i did, and hell its just as good the second time around XD now i can actually put a review with my name, though i'd only say the same i did in my anon review, but yea, totally **' story and you really oughta get back to it some time...

so update!! Edo-kun's gotta be all cool yo, and there's plently of enbarassing, akward, misunderstood, confusing fluff to come, i just know it, and i really wanna read it, so get on it buddy!!

till next *Salute-waves* Sayounara, Joe!!
-Ikasury
nothings.better.than.plywood
2008-09-15 . chapter 9
I love your story so much! :)
kitsunetamer24
2008-07-31 . chapter 13
i want to read more, more CHAPTERS!
Black Kitsune Tsuki
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
I enjoy reading this story very much!!Please don't stop writting this story it would be such a waste of a great story!!
LysdexicOne
2008-07-14 . chapter 13
I love this story. Absolutely cannot wait for the world to find out about his new self, wonder what will happen...
Kitsune Ash
2008-07-06 . chapter 13
AH!

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PLEASE
IM BEGGIN YOU
DustBunnyQueen
2008-05-29 . chapter 1
Good story so far! hope you update it soon! ::snickers:: Santa Clause of Death...lol...that's FUNNY!
Darth-Taisha
2008-05-27 . chapter 12
Joe, I read this for a second time. Even though there are a lot of spelling errors I still think it is one of the best story plots I have ever read in a Naruto fanfic. The scenes between Hinata and Naruto are really terrific. Also, the talks between Naruto and Kyuubi are also funny and heartwarming at the same time. I really hope you get motivated to finish this. I would be glad to help proof it if you need help.
Demimeg
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED YET?!

i have been very patient and have waited Quietly for a very Very LONG time ... But enough is enough!

This is an excellent fic, one which i have been enjoying immensely ... but re-reading can only do so much, and as much as i like to speculate about where the next twist and turn will lead, It is still YOUR STORY which i am reading and it is still YOUR PLOT which i am waiting Ever SO Patiently for you to UPDATE!

So why are you making us poor devoties of your supeirior writing abillity suffer so? Why dont you put us out of our missery and tell us what happens next? Pritty Please? Im dien' here!

Thank you ever so much for all the work, time, and effort that you have put into this fic so far ... it has not been in vain
But now that you have us so thoroghly hooked you need to fullfill your sworn duity and ...

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

Much Luv~ Demimeg (minor goddess of teenlove and insecurities)
Narilyte
2008-05-16 . chapter 13
While there have been some things that have bugged me (mentioned in previous chapter reviews) overall I gotta say I have enjoyed this story. It's different and has been a good read.

If you get the chance I would definitely like to see it continue and I'll be watching for updates.
Narilyte
2008-05-15 . chapter 10
Not too bad of a chapter though I gotta say the beginning of the exam seemed overdone... it kind of reminded me of a WWE/WCW/ECW/etc. They're here to prove they can perform like a Chunin, not make flashy entrances. Also a thought is as Ninja, it's best they are no distinctly remembered. If they make a really flashy entrance that burns into the memories of everyone present, wouldn't that make it difficult for them to do covert missions in the future? Anyone who was at the tournament would remember them for that distinct entrance, and blow their cover.

Just some thoughts.
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