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| oOo-Kaede Higuchi-oOo 2008-05-28 ch 12, | abuseYAY! Ed's up next! Guardian of Static? Well...that's original... |
| D.J. Scales 2008-04-24 ch 12, | abuseDoes the Next chapter mean that ed finds his Gym? |
| Mystica234 2008-03-23 ch 12, | abuseNice battles. You're a really good Pokemon story writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. What's going to happen once all of them are at their gyms? |
| oOo-Kaede Higuchi-oOo 2007-11-12 ch 11, | abuseI know what the next chapter's name is! "Deets, Warrior of the Wind"! Estoy feliz de que estes de regreso! :3 |
| Dancing Flame's wind 2007-11-12 ch 11, | abuseNice update soon please, and nice names for the gym leaders |
| D.J. Scales 2007-11-11 ch 11, | abuseDoes that mean that Deets found her wind element gym in the next chapter and does that mean we're going to run into some former members of team Aqua? |
| oOo-Kaede Higuchi-oOo 2007-07-31 ch 10, | abuse-blinks- pun? -looks around her- where? |
| D.J. Scales 2007-07-26 ch 10, | abuseSounds like the Dragon City Characters are going to have a difficult time holding their own aganist Team Eclipse. Hey did you know that you'll have to make an adjustment to include fired members of Team Galaxy from teh Sinnoh region. |
| Mystica234 2007-07-25 ch 10, | abuseGood chapter. My new one is up. The one that connects to this story...my newer one. |
| Dancing Flame's wind 2007-07-25 ch 10, | abuseNice chapter please update as soon as you can. |
| Moviefan18 2007-07-18 ch 9, | abuseNice,but why "Faraón"?Don't forget to write about Santa Fe...(puppy dog eyes)pretty please? |
| oOo-Kaede Higuchi-oOo 2007-07-17 ch 9, | abuseNice name for the next chapter. "Burn, the Fire Pharao" Sounds like something out of the fairytles I used to read when I was 8. I'm looking forward to this chapter. Oh, I almost forgot.-hits Firefly with a sock- THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR UPDATING AFTER FOREVAH!! NYAH! |
| Mystica234 2007-07-16 ch 9, | abuseNice story. Continue soong. I see you are using Diamond and Pearl pokemon and attacks. ^_^ |
| D.J. Scales 2007-07-16 ch 9, | abuseNice chapter but are we ever going to meet the members of Team Eclipse? |
| Mystica234 2007-06-27 ch 8, | abuseI used goggle transpater to try and guess the next chapter. I think i know what it is. But I want to find out if I'm right. |