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Reviews For: Somewhere On Mars

maria
2007-01-10
ch 1, anon.
abusei like it! plz do more
forevermagik
2006-09-06
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting and well written. It could have easily happened, I could see it happening. It is a very good story.
exocontinual protocols
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuseVery good. Poor Dairine :( I liked Nita saying that they didn't just watch, that was a really good line. One thing, though, you said she was dressed in a traditional Wellakh outfit, but I thought she didn't change out of her normal clothes when she went back to talk to his parents, there was even a line in there about the one person who could convince her to change being gone, I thought...but that's just one little thing. I really like it! It was all very in character and well written and just done vert well :) Bravo!
foreverforgetful
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abusePoor Dari, I liked this! Even if it was sad... Keep writing :D

~Seri
'loha
2006-09-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is a good story. I like Nita's advice.
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