Nice twist. Good story.

That was...weird.
But I like it.
Good Job.

~Beautifully Tainted~

very clever with an unexpected ending. love it

Original one-shot, I like it, especially the way Hermione impersonates Tobias Snape.

Clever! I wondered how Hermione was going to fit in!

Cute story and I admit I did not expect Hermione to appear. I was thinking that Severus was masquerading as his own father. One nitpick here though. The word is "auror" not "aurora". I don't know why, but in the last month I've seen at least half a dozen authors make this mistake.

that was a twist. good job.