continue! this is good :]
and culd u possibly send linkage for that deviantart pic u were talking about? i would REALLY like to see it but i can't find it anywhere :[[
help?

Nice.

Haha, that was a sweet first chapter. Poor Jill... her boyfriend sounds like a douchebag. (And I can tell you a lot about douchebags.) I want to see how Jill and Gustafa interact, too, knowing that Gustafa's normally NOT a "hardcore" kind of guy. :P

PLZ COUNTINUE!

Between shattering diffident boyfriend's eardrums and frightening old ladies, this Jill is someone to give Karen at her worst some real competition.

I wanna see how she manages to avoid being lynched by the villagers.

I like it a lot! Update soon! :D