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openwindow
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
hahaha! i could actually so see him out there weeding the entire pitch just appease the quidditch gods...LOLOL~!
jillmarie724
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
I love it-and I love Katie and Oliver! More por favor!
heyyodude
2008-03-24 . chapter 1
aw!
thats so cute!
ollie and katie NEED to get married and have children who dominate the Gryffindor Quidditch team.
because that would honestly be adorable!
this is a great one-shot.
seriously.

keep writing,
heyyo.
the voice of singing clouds
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
Aww... that's really cute! I didn't know there were quidditch gods! (even if there arn't) that's really cool! Good idea!!
~skysong
dizzy
2006-11-20 . chapter 1
i like the idea, it's very different and funny.
TooSweet4Words
2006-10-16 . chapter 1
Aw, a very nice and a very sweet story. Good stuff.
ms james potter
2006-09-17 . chapter 1
weeding the pitch .. oliver's insane.
I LOVE IT.
CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
oh this was really cute! ! ! I loved it! ! !
katetastic
2006-09-04 . chapter 1
Very good job! I like it! I think it was super cute how Oliver researched to find the correct date and everything! August 14 as Katie's birthday...intersting (lol)

Great job SEJ!!

~rosa~
anonms
2006-09-03 . chapter 1
this is so funny and just so good. the idea is so cute!
redireas
2006-09-03 . chapter 1
hmm... this is miles, but apparently you are signed in, and i don't want to sign you out, so i'm reviewing from your pen name. anyways, this is definitely not my favorite story. the relationship between katie and oliver was a little hard to follow - were they getting along, or were they constantly quarrelling? i think you could've made that more clear. however, it did have its funny points - the "obnoxious" thing made me laugh. i didn't really like the plot line, either, but that's just me. sorry this one is so critique-y, but it's just how i feel.

everything,
miles
one
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
you deserve a long long review!
this idea is just so new and interesting!not a common idea in fan fic, this is.

haha weeding for the gods? just like the time i use to think that eating spinach will give u muscles. muhahaha
oliver is too cute in this one. i thought he really went obsess as too really do the weeding ritual man he just really seems like that type.

cool line:

Why are you like this?”

“Like what?”

“Obnoxious.”

“My parents have this theory…”

katie is just so hilarious. i like to give this type of reply too.

long enough?
keep us busy with new stories like that please!
100-percent-Harry-Potter-obsessed
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
I loved it! Into the favs it goes!
justsukiya
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
ohh man how cute was that
Quidditch gods and a weeding ceremony
what an interesting way to ask someone out

lol i liked it
great job
Moonstone
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
That was funny. Really cute.
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