You are a brilliant writer.

Ah, the best, as always. I love it!

Tora: i didn't really understand the title. but it was very descriptive. i liked it. yes, i am the type of person who likes those dark angsty stories. it's way better than anything i could write. If you ever need a beta i'm your girl. just IM me. i think my screen name's on our profile. don't email me. we use TheEvilestGirlChild's email adress.

This is good ... And I'm afraid that any review I give won't be good enough to measure up to the quality of the writing you write ... but I really liked it, even if I didn't get some things (mainly the title ..?)

I liked the way it was set up and written, and the little ... not quite humerous (where's the spell check when you need it?), but still kind of amusing (that is also not quite the right word for it ...) bits ... Yeah, it's written really well. Great work!

(And sorry for all the dots in this review. :))

Needs some rainbows and smiley faces. Perk that boy right up. :)

Wow, poor Artemis. I liked it though :D It seems like maybe Artemis would just poison himself, sinse it has the potential of being less painful, and wouldn't ruin any of the chairs...

~Seri

I think it is very well writen. Good job. It is very Artemis in tone and for that I applaud you. Bravo, m'dear.

I liked that, actually. My only thing would be that on 'what' it doesn't seem that he's chosen to shoot himself/slit his wrists yet. But then later he seems have chosen the latter. It may be a small thing, but I think it would be good to have it definitively decided - the point is that he has no more questions to answer, right? so that left me feeling he still had to answer the what question. That's me done being useful! Hope it helped!