poor iolaus! will there be any more of this, or is it a oneshot? cuz it's great!

signed,

onewhowatches :3

aww...cute. i wish it got farther..but..o well..*sigh*

nice story -good continuation of character, plus you didn't make it too trashy! keep up the good work :)

All through the story, it was easy to picture Iolaus's frustration and desperation. One tiny suggestion: skip a line between your paragraphs, so it doesn't all run together. You might go back and do that for this story for future readers. Other than that, you did a nice job.