I think you should have strung out the ending a little bit, It seems kind of rushed.

great

I read this all at once. Must say, although there are some spelling and grammar issues (i.e. know instead of now) this is an amazing story, with brilliant personifications! My one request is that you get a beta reader to check your spellingand grammar for you if you aren't familiar enough with the language to do so yourself.

good job, you have kept with the chaaracters fairly well for only reading one of his books.

Keep reading, cause they are all awesome.

keep writing too. I want to know more about the threat

Awesome job with this story, I came away very impressed. Keep up the great work!

AH! Clive Cussler is on the list! ...And I have to say, I really like this! And your Ebglish is great, esp. since it's not your first language! Now...on to the next chapter!

Liked it, very good ending, my little sister said it need more Al in it though, lol :P

Just found your story. I'm a big fan of Clive Cussler and I have to say you did a very good job with this story. Thanks for a good read.

Wow i liked this story I didn't realise we could post Clive Cussler fics here I hope you don't mind me adding one more that I've had written for a while.

YOU ARE AMAZING! I didn't even know there was a Clive Cussler section on this, and i commend you for writing the one and only story in this section! It is amazing and very realistic! I cannot wait to read the rest! Sincerely, Sam. Wykd

This is very good. I have been reading Clive Cussler for years and this fits his characters very well. The only part that wasn't quite in character *at least in my mind* was Al shooting him, but with something like that it wouldn't be all that surprising. Apart for the grammer errors you mentioned this is good writing. This was an awesome story :D

it was good keep going.

I'm sorry not to read your story, but I was wondering if you could help me with a problem. I am trying to create a new category, but I am not sure how to do it, or even if it is possible. If you could help me with this, it would be great. Thank you.

I've read stories by people I assume were native English speakers with English that didn't have grammar as good as this. You also seem to have a pretty good grasp of the characters, at least as far as I can tell from one chapter. I put the story in my story alert list.

Finally a CC fan wiling to write a CC/Dirk pitt fanfic.

Awesome story and i cant wait to read more!

If you want to learn more about Dirk and Al,read Mayday and Pacific Vortex.

Cheers :)

Ps: my fave cc novel is Pacific Vortex.