Really REALLY good, but I need to know how it ends! Please please PLEASE update it soon!

Well, since the next chapters have raised rating, well, they wont appear on FF.net...

Maybe later i will create a PG-13 edited version

This is an excellent story. You've somehow created a "Lovely Angels" story that doesn't involve either Kai's or Yuri's bust size (a commendable feat on its own) that is very enjoyable. Please continue this!

that was cool

Hey i love Dirty Pair and well i love ur story

I am confused... Is it Dirty Pair Flash or the Original Dirty Pair?

Now what should I say about this...Hmmm...Hmmm... No typos causing me a headache...Hmmm...I didn't fall a sleep reading it...Hmmm...Hmmm...I would rate it...Few points from excellent...And...HURRY UP WITH THAT #@¤! NEXT CHAPTER!!

---DeeDee---

breathless

Nice story I hope to see more of it. The begining is kinda dull but toward chapter 5 you dfietnly get the feel of the Lovely Angels.

This is really excellent. Unlike a lot of the other authors of DP fanfic on this site, you really seem to have a feel for the characters of the Angels and for the tone of a DP story.