 RaynaDarkstorm 1/21/05 . chapter 5Really REALLY good, but I need to know how it ends! Please please PLEASE update it soon! |
 anon 11/24/02 . chapter 1 Well, since the next chapters have raised rating, well, they wont appear on FF.net...
Maybe later i will create a PG-13 edited version |
 Tidus1924 10/20/02 . chapter 5This is an excellent story. You've somehow created a "Lovely Angels" story that doesn't involve either Kai's or Yuri's bust size (a commendable feat on its own) that is very enjoyable. Please continue this! |
 DancingFire 9/28/02 . chapter 1 that was cool |
 anon 7/18/02 . chapter 5 Hey i love Dirty Pair and well i love ur story |
 Meitantei Kudo KID 5/16/02 . chapter 1 I am confused... Is it Dirty Pair Flash or the Original Dirty Pair? |
 WhiteSparrow 5/2/02 . chapter 5Now what should I say about this...Hmmm...Hmmm... No typos causing me a headache...Hmmm...I didn't fall a sleep reading it...Hmmm...Hmmm...I would rate it...Few points from excellent...And...HURRY UP WITH THAT #@! NEXT CHAPTER!
-DeeDee- |
 Darkened 3/1/02 . chapter 1breathless |
 Darth 11/6/01 . chapter 1 Nice story I hope to see more of it. The begining is kinda dull but toward chapter 5 you dfietnly get the feel of the Lovely Angels. |
 YellowBook 9/12/01 . chapter 5 This is really excellent. Unlike a lot of the other authors of DP fanfic on this site, you really seem to have a feel for the characters of the Angels and for the tone of a DP story. |