I really liked this story. The final chapter was pretty sad. There were a few spelling errors throughout the story, but it was no big deal. Great job!

dude that sucks! could you not have done something differant!? something happy!? thats not drama that tragity! and your ending was week as heck.

Very sad chaoter, but great:)

...wow... I REALLY don't like tragedy... You do realize that the little man'll probably kill himself now, right? Dang, this has me in tears...

Update! :D

WTF do you mean when you say the next episode will be the last!? if you discontinue this fic, i will come to your house with a machete and... nah, but PLEASE make this like one of those 20 chapter fics, i don't want it to have an end! it's the most unique and interesting K/18 fic I've ever read! (please,please,please update really fast!)

Awsome chapter can't wait for moe :)

I withdraw that comment about the "I love you" coming too early, after further consideration, I figure it's actually quite in character for him and mirrors the canon story.

>waves a hand over his head in a gesture of his lack of perception<

It's a better story now!

Perhaps the "I love her" was a bit premature, but otherwise this is a very engaging story. I look forward to future chapters!

Omg OMG OMG please update soon! this is a great story and i hope you update like REALLY soon. I can't really think of any flaws in this stroy so way to go.

Update soon!

Ah, the plot thickens, eh? Cool. What happens next will be very interesting! Bravo!

Yay! You updated! Oh i really liked this chaper, please try your best to update =D It`s funny cuz just the other day i was wondering when this would be updated o.O

Update, or I shall unleash the FUZZY EASTER CHICKS OF DOOM! You have been warned.

AWESOME STORY! Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! P.S. How did you come up with the strange language she speaks? Cool idea.