 SapphireShell91 2009-10-10 . chapter 1Deep, dark and simple.
This is absolutely brilliant. You are very creative with your use of words. My favourite part of this is probably Rue's blurb. That was just so deep and capturing and well written.
Wonderful Job! |
 azure orbis 2009-09-13 . chapter 1I don't know what I liked most about this: the repetition, the fairytale-like summaries or the fact that Ahiru comes up with the best possible and perhaps unthought of solution. Oh and the part of Rue was awesome, of how the Raven trapped her with a cage of words rather than steel or stone. |
 Circular Infinity 2008-12-20 . chapter 1Very nice. This really shows one of the cores of the Princess Tutu story and you express it beautifully. |
 Full Shadow Alchemist 2008-11-16 . chapter 1That was a really powerful statement there. You never mentioned names, and yet it was easy to figure out who was who. That final line, like I said, was powerful. |
 Dannika Bakker 2007-07-15 . chapter 1 Powerful. Just...powerful. That's all there is to say. |
 Goddess Kes 2007-04-10 . chapter 1You write some lovely stuff, I'd like to see more Princess Tutu fics from you, if the spirit moves you. |
 Cor-chan 2007-01-17 . chapter 1...Whoa. *blink* That ending is a stab.
And I love your talent with words. I especially love "He had no physical form, and no high tower to lock her away, so he built a cage of words to hold her in, and let the princess turn her own brittle heart into the lock." That is a very, VERY astute observation, especially with the allusion to Rapunzel.
I love your stuff. It gives me this wonderful twisting sensation in my chest. |
 Archangel Rhapsody 2006-11-02 . chapter 1Interesting. |
 Melan Blue 2006-10-16 . chapter 1I like it! You're one of the writers here that are making me absolutely adore short fics. |
 Coldjava 2006-10-15 . chapter 1ok cute little character description there. and maybe if it was a prolouge ( i dont know the diffrences with a prolouge and a story so plz bear with me!)you should make a 2nd chappie. it was good |
 hello heartbreak 2006-09-06 . chapter 1Beautifully chilling. |
 nilnil 2006-09-06 . chapter 1OMG!
this is so... simple yet... so dark. This little fic sort of changed the whole course of the anime series... with just two words.
Although that sounded OOC, but those two words really made an impact. ...
urgh i dun't noe how to describe it but ah i luv this fic |
 Riana1 2006-09-03 . chapter 1Beautiful. Honestly beautiful. |
 TTF12 2006-09-03 . chapter 1 nice! i enjoyed it! cant wait to read more of your fics! |
 LunaSphere 2006-09-03 . chapter 1This was truly beautiful. Succinct and perfectly in keeping with the series. My only suggestion would be perhaps "Savior" as the title instead. |