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The Karlminion
2008-02-16
ch 3,
abuseWatching mindless tv whilst wearing bathrobes and ingesting ice cream is great justice. The more ingested, the greater the justice.

And good chapter, too. The end was rather more random than the rest; random shounen is nothing to gawk at, but Duke groping Elli? Terrific.

-=this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off=-
Aya Rose
2008-02-11
ch 3,
abuse“This would be really hot, if it weren't so creepy.”
The Scarlet Sky
2008-01-13
ch 3,
abuse(applause)

Great. Really great!

Perhaps the mysterious figure was a certain blonde? And maybe--MAYBE--she'll explain what awful thing Elli did? If anything? ;)

Duke and Manna were priceless, the Doctor and Snuggles made me crack up, Kai and Rick were insane, and it just made me smile and giggle. Poor Elli. XD

Good work, as always! ^^
Miss Ann Onn
2007-07-10
ch 2,
abuseMore! I want more! This is an amazing story, and I can't wait to figure out what comes next!
The Karlminion
2007-05-15
ch 2,
abuseWhen ya gonna write more, dearie? This is totally cool!

Seriously, write more. I can't find decent HM fic any longer.

-=this be The Karlminion, and he be signin' off=-
lotus head
2007-04-09
ch 2,
abuseOMG. *brain dead* Rick... and Kai... *snickers* And Jeff and Carter and **!Lillia. *hysterical* And... I want to know. What has she done!? ...Elli. Karen. Consolation sex. *dies of laughter-induced suffocation*

...snap, that wasn't very coherent, huh?
Atavaka
2007-02-26
ch 2,
abuseToo funny. Sasha's lines are my favorite thus far, though Karen's spiel about Rick and Popuri come in a very close second.

I've never really seen a soap opera before, but this little fic gives me enough melodrama to last a lifetime. Poor Elli seems to be in over her head here. I wonder how she gets out of this mad dream world...

Anyways, don't be embarassed by this. It's clever, witty, and all other complimentary adjectives usually given to parodies and comedic pieces. Keep it coming!
1angelette
2007-02-22
ch 2,
abuseOh, my, god. You UPDATED! *heart attack* Seriously, I was hoping that you'd update... and hoping... and hoping...

What did Elli do? Did she even DO something? Knowing you, she might not have...
iterica
2007-02-20
ch 2,
abuselol...im confused.

but then again, so is elli. totally aggravating to know you've done something wrong and not know WHAT it is.

update soon! =)
Jersey Strat-O
2007-02-20
ch 2,
abuseAww, crap... I had this review written out and everything, but my internet decided to keel over for a minute back there. Anyway... I can't believe I didn't review this the first time. Poor Elli... being caught up in this hilariously dramatic drama (not to mention having everyone melodramatically overreact to whatever it was she did... then again, she could've done something heinously evil *cue evil music*). The whole thing with the sordid web of love affairs is too funny, too, though I think my head "a sploded" trying to follow it all. "Aspolding" heads is what you wanted, right? Was that your angle? :P

I have several thoughts about this whole deal behind the madness:

1. Poor Elli (again)
2. Scratch that, she's probably trashed on cough syrup.
3. No wait, I still feel sorry for her. I'd go nuts too if I were trapped in the worst of the worse soap operas.
4. Maybe Sue!Farmer is the evil cloaked figure behind the madness.
5. The thought of Elli trashed on cough syrup is still really, really funny.

Oh... and LoveyDovey!Duke and Manna, Elli's sweetly delivered sarcasm, and Bizzarro!Everyone Ever is really just way too funny. That, and Elli's line: "I want to go back home, where people are smart." And anything pertaining to *dramatic pause* AMNESIA! *cue thunder*

Or I could just add this to my favorites list already. :)
Chicken Yuki
2007-02-20
ch 2,
abuseA totally not inexplicable Villain:

Rock Enrole/Coward: Strives to be a "true" Story Villain because he wants chicks. Is angry that Rick got to be a villain and won fangirls aplenty after nearly beating the tar out of super powered batchelorettes.

Oh, right. Review the story, sorry.

Ha, ha. Funny funny.

Duke and Manna's hillarious make-up/break-up scenario,
Sasha's bizzare antics,
And the most laid-back shadowy figure IN ALL THE LAND!

Now I really wish "Steve" was my childhood friend... instead of writing it down in some random Junior High setting Fanfiction...
1HM<3Angel
2006-12-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseUpdate! Please, please, please, please, please? There has never been a better soap opera! I just want to know what Elli did! This is so godamn hilarious! Pretty please?
Moonlit Dreaming
2006-09-03
ch 1,
abuseHahaha...this story is great and so funny! I really want to know what's going on now!
Hikari Blaze
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuseHaha, this is hilarious with the Doctor crying about his nurse having amnesia and the loss of poor Snuggles! What's going on here?
kelley28
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuseOh man, I finally stopped laughing enough to able to write out a review. LMAO! I can't decide what's funnier, that no one tells Elli what she did, or that bunnies became extinct after Doc lost his pet.
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