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| specialfrog 2006-10-04 ch 16,  | abuseGreat finale- very criptic and intwined :)Thanks for leaving out the JS smut to! Hope ill be reading some of your MS work soon- you are a great writer |
| anmodo 2006-10-04 ch 16, | abuseGreat ending. Enjoyed this story very much! And that says a lot considering it was Martin/OC. But you balanced it well among all the characters. |
| ukeleleboy 2006-10-04 ch 16, | abuseBeautifuf end. I liked so much the story. Truly second chances. Good work, waiting for your next story. |
| katydid13 2006-10-03 ch 16, | abuseYou need a follow-up story! I even like that you made Sam and Jack work out. I'm not usually a fan of that but with transfers and stuff it works. |
| ukeleleboy 2006-10-02 ch 15, | abuseAnd Danny has a girlfriend, and Jack and Sam are together, the whole story and this chapter are perfect. The characters are very well here, and the friendship between them is very nice. I liked so much. Continue, please! |
| ninz 2006-10-01 ch 15, | abuseReally loved the conversation between Sam, Martin and Danny in the hospital about Danny's girlfriend... ;-) |
| Naia 2006-10-01 ch 15, anon. | abuseYay! Another chapter! Keep going! |
| Naia 2006-10-01 ch 14, anon. | abuseKeep going! This is a really good story, and I wanna know who was shot! |
| ninz 2006-10-01 ch 14, | abuseDon't stop here! Update! |
| ukeleleboy 2006-10-01 ch 14, | abuseWhat interesting and exciting chapter at the end! I liked so much. Update soon, please! |
| specialfrog 2006-09-30 ch 14, | abuseeek oh no! (but go Sam- girl power!) |
| anmodo 2006-09-30 ch 14, | abuseExcellent development in this chapter. Loved how Sam put it together. Like the J/S moments as well. |
| ninz 2006-09-27 ch 13, | abuseOh dear - what's with Maggie! Update soon! ;-) |
| specialfrog 2006-09-27 ch 13, | abuseah J/S...ew other than that it was good :) |
| hotchner 2006-09-27 ch 13, | abuseThat was a SUPERB Chapter. I Loved it when Victor got onto that Jackass of a FBI man. I guess they all knew what he was up to. I REALLY LOVED it when Jack took Sam home and ended up in bed together. I hope that nothing happens for awhile though. Jack is feeling guilty right now. Keep up the Magnificient Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter. |