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| Operatastic SuperSop 2007-02-25 ch 10,  | abuseAw, what a sweet ending. Just one thing that bothered me: When Erik is insistent on staying in front of Adrienne's house, instead of saying that Meg sat down beside him, you say that Adrienne did it ("Adrienne's anger melted away from that and she slightly smiled at him"). Also, I prefer a more twisted phantom, but this was a cute story. I'll read some of your other stuff--you should read some of mine! I'm always looking for criticism. :) |
| THeFaCeiNTHeMaSK 2007-02-24 ch 10, | abuseI loved this! OMG, it was amazing! Do you have any other Phan Phics? |
| The Phantom Authoress 2007-02-03 ch 9, | abuseThis is very good, keep it up. Plz continue. |
| Operatastic SuperSop 2007-01-23 ch 9, | abuseAh, well, I don't know anything either... about Hannibal, I mean. Your story reminds me a lot of Crawford Erik (very good thing). Um... I think the Christine-Raoul getting back together was a little too easy, and then Adrienne saying, "I forgive you and love you; come back if you wish" was a little convenient. I don't know how you'd fix it, but I think that it should be a little more complicated to resolve both of those. Otherwise, good story. :) |
| Paradise Beyond 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseO i just loved this story. It has a lot in it but i intend on reading it fully in the near future. The characters seem very entusiastic to begin on their course of events and i cant wait to see what happens. I am very excited to see what happens to that Erik fellow because we do stake claim to the same name. Keep writing, you are doing a wonderful job! |
| Operatastic SuperSop 2007-01-06 ch 8, | abuseGood chapter. Update soon, please |
| TheAngel'sMaggie 2007-01-02 ch 8, | abuseI love this story! Adrienne is awesome! |
| Lady Wen 2007-01-02 ch 8, | abuseI am confused about something. WHY is Raoul not coming after Christine?? Supposedly he did beat her but now she is shacking up with Erik while she is still married to Raoul? This is the 1870's and I can't imagine that is good for Christine's image. How can she bring Erik to a party where all of friend giggle over him? I guess those were the ballet rats. but, if Raoul is a patron of the Opera wouldn't he be there? Adrienne is far better than Christine. wendy |
| Operatastic SuperSop 2006-12-16 ch 7, | abuseOh, poor... well, everybody, but especially Adrienne and Erik. Keep writing. |
| Anon 2006-12-14 ch 7, anon. | abuse*ahem* Raoul would NEVER beat Christine. |
| Lady Wen 2006-12-13 ch 7, | abuse5 words- I do NOT trust Christine! |
| BluDemon 2006-11-26 ch 6, | abuseI hope Adrienne won't be that mad at Erik. He deserves a little scolding tho. :) |
| Operatastic SuperSop 2006-11-25 ch 6, | abuseOh, dear. Poor Adrienne... and poor Christine. I can't see any way that this will end very well for any of them. This is really excellently written, and though I don't like sex scenes, this wasn't really so explicit or unnecessarily lengthened. Keep writing. |
| Operatastic SuperSop 2006-10-23 ch 5, | abuseOoh, drama. This is a good story. I only hope things turn out well in the end... |
| Operatastic SuperSop 2006-10-23 ch 2, | abuseAh, the complex infrastructure known as the female mind (Relient K, if you didn't know where I was pulling that phrase from). I don't get it, and I'm a female. But I like your story... I think it is a bit too soon for them, especially him, who still loves Christine, right? I'll keep reading. |