oh so thats what a lemon is lol anyways good story cant wait for the next chapter

just hinaxnaru and make it so sasuke falls for sakura on thier exercise

you replied fast! and just so u know, im not criticising u

i know what u mean but i was saying that it is ipossible to change something like kyuubibeng sealed because he knows it happened which means it didnt work, cuz it did work then it never would of happened, so what im saying is if u went back in time to do something like rescue ur wife, and she was dead before u went back in time, that would mean u never fixed it cuz it would never of happened to begin with it like if u went back in time and killed ur mom b4 u were born, then u would never have been born witch means u never could of shot her time is written in stone because if u change the past it never happend so u never went back to change it! (i probably lost u D)

NaruHina fic definately, Sakura is selfish and hates Naruto, she has a one minded track and thats to be with Sasuke...in bed *cough* whore *cough*. Good chap, btw but I would like to see longer chaps later in the future for this story.

I say yes cause I like NaruHina with lemons but thats my opinion, but I only like lemons if it's well written and detailed.

THAT WAS AWESOME KEEP GOING ,you really dont have to ask about the lemons cuz the majoraty wants that anyway

so wat you are going to have naruto go out with both hinata and sakurea at the same time and they share him?

if thats the case i say do it i love to see the blonde idiot score two girls at once

just NaruXHina

1 you need to add more details when you talk about somthing it's to blunt the way you have it 2 it's not comed all over it would be 'came' all over 3 when talking about a penis on you can get in trouble for saying dick or penis, use terms like 'his length' or 'member' things like that i've seen fics be deleted for that 4 i don't think naruXhinaXsakura would be all that great thats just an opnion tho

LOL...oh man, hehehe...if Kissing her senseless isn't something more than friends I'm almost scared to know what is...LOL

and hey they are only 12 right?

Hey if you need a beta let me know:D

SWEET! I've always liked the time traveling fics...THANKS:D

I maybe be voting too late... but I would say no lemon unless there's a massive time-skip. They're just little kids. 12 year olds shouldn't be doing that.

I'd prefere 'pure' NaruxHina .. but it's up to you ...

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