I love your writing. I've only read this and the Marauders Advice thingsy but I loved them both! This is the first fic in a while to make me laugh. Thanks. I was having a boring new years eve...then I read this. Thanks.

Ahaha, this was absolutely brilliant :)

A little confusing but still very funny (: good job

confiscate and obliviate- hey that rhymes!
stun and run
jump and hump (then do the aforementioned rhyme if u dont want to be murdered at such a young naive point in ur life)
grumpy and sleepy
oh i am on a roll tonite! lets see...
handsome and toast!!...wait, no

lovin it,
do-u-question-my-sanity-yet?-do-u-?-do-u-?-do-u-?/ livin and breathin

“I solemnly swear that I am up to no good. Hey! This is fun!”

“Mischief managed”

“I solemnly swear that I am up to no good”

“Mischief managed”

“I solemnly swear that I am up to no good.”

“Mis-- ”

“Okay! You can stop now!”

“Honestly you two are so immature.”

“Immaturity is a virtue Moony. Having your wand up your ass is not.”

“I do not have my wand up my-- ”

“Umm… something’s scratching my ankle.”

LOL. I loved this. Nice work. Hee, I would do that just keep repeating it. That's like hours of endless amusement.

Wow. That is really interesting. It's amazing how ever though it's just dialogue (no names ever) I can still follow exactly whose talking and exactly what's happening.

You've managed that really well. When I first started i thought i'd just get lost, but no. It was also quite exciting and fast paced. Love the ending.

I didn't think it was hard to follow, it was really good.
the only problem i had was that you kept saying "it's greatness" and if you have an apostrophe in "it's" it turns the meaning of it into "it is".
Other than that, which annoyed me, but i am a bit paranoid about those thins, it was great.

Hey Shoey, that was great. i loved the bit when pete pointed out all the obvious bits as you always make him do! it was a great one shot. i liked the part when one of them keeps playing with it. "I somely swear i am up to no good" and "mischief managed" it's funny.

bye

(bye the way, if you read HP book 1, i think you pick up that James is a seeker. Its better his sons follows in his foot steps isn't it? he's be a shit chaser anyways. the quaffle's too big. JAMES IS SEEKER)

this is pretty funny