I love this story so very much. I know people have lives and the such, but it's been years. So if you are not going to continue this because of a more pressing engagement any objection to posting that bits of 7.2 you said you had in the authors note?

Hi I really like your syroy, and look forward to reading the next chapter. :D

Great story. Pls update soon.

WAH! why dont u fix it!1

fix it or die!1

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This story makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! I've read the whole thing, but I didn't want you to get a whole stream of reviews, only to find out that they're all from one person. If you want me to review each chapter, I'd be happy to, though. Anyway, This is really nicely written, and the plot goes at a good pace for readers to keep up with but not get bored. The characters are portrayed really well, too. No OOC here!

Wow, this story is awesome! im just wondering though... are you still writing this?

I have to say, I'm very surprised. Seldom does one come across a story as well written as this. But, I would of thought Dojo be around a little longer than just hatching. After that minor detail, I am amazed there's a good Xiaolin Showdown story--and writer, for that matter--in existence.

Still awesome! Keep up the good writing! (Even though most of my animated obssessions have been mainly in HagaRen and Bleach and Naruto and Blood and out of XS...I still think it's great!

Sa! This is one of the most profound stories I've ever read about the first generation dragons. I look forward to your next up-date, and hope it's as wonderful as the chapters thus far.

Punishment with positive reinforcement is how we're gonna do this. Like a parent. *doom music*

Let's see, it's been how long? How many times did we speak and you swore you'd get it posted sooner? I think I've written about 10 collective chapters since you updated this last. But thank God almighty you updated! I'm just really glad you didn't give up. I'd have to come over and chain you to your computer or something.
The length was really easy to read and I think it was a good idea to split the chapter into two parts. They're obviously related, but you're treating it like the calm before the storm which is good. This way we get to see how the characters have grown, we can mull that over for awhile, and then we'll be ready for the chaos that is sure to insue. I think that long paragraph toward the end is the most Chase has ever said at one time. And he's definantly turning into the Hakkai of Xiaolin Dragons. (omg, you probably don't even remember that conversation. ignore my old woman reminiscing)
Not because you've turned me into a total fangirl, but my favorite part was the final moment between Chase and Guan. Romanticism aside, I really like the relationship they've developed, and are continuing to develop. The best part was when you made Guan realize their age difference. It's kind of a wake up call when you're a mentor but have an inkling to become something more; however, you realize that might not be such a good idea. And if you're the younger party who just doesn't know what to do with themselves and their feelings. Of course I might be getting ahead of myself here and that isn't even what's going on.

Anyway, I've rambled enough. Lovely, lovely as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter. You're being all insightful with your story right now while my next chapter is just gonna be smut. Yeah... I feel so accomlpished now. Awesome.

I'm still readin it!

Peace,
Cat