| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Love of a Darkness |
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fakemannequin 2/11/13 . chapter 9please continue... love the story |
One of the Colorless 3/31/12 . chapter 9...why was the sugar high chapter the longest? o_O |
Random Person 5/10/11 . chapter 9 Nice! I hope you post another chapter! |
subaru1999 2/20/10 . chapter 9wonderful story, i hope you someday decide to continue it! |
xDarklightx 7/25/09 . chapter 9I like it. I hope you update soon. It is an interesting story. |
Lolchen 4/27/09 . chapter 9I must say I'm a little... disappointed. After it took you so long to get this chapter out, most of it was advertising different bands and songs. Honestly, I just skipped them. Then there was, what, four paragraphs about the plot? Not really best you could do. And I just realized how OOC you make the characters. True, that didn't bug me two years ago, but still... Just that Yami doesn't respect cats is ridiculous. He was taught who to respect and stuff in Ancient Egypt. It's like saying a female Muslim tap-dances naked in an Arabic pup in, hmm I dunno, maybe Iran?, where she grew up and was taught by the sternest parents who still watch over her. This is rather a fun story for I'm-bored-out-of-my-mind days than something I can read seriously. Guess I'm in the wrong mood, then. - and Bastet still doesn't have cold eyes. Make her go into Sekhmet mode if needs be ;P lg Lolchen |
tamar 10/23/08 . chapter 1 o thats funny! Those yamis are eating out of the palm of thier hands. |
emo-foxkitten 8/7/08 . chapter 8is it tenshi? please write more! |
emo-foxkitten 8/7/08 . chapter 4they could have been more srprised but it was good! |
emo-foxkitten 8/7/08 . chapter 2i just now i love this story all ready! |
emo-foxkitten 8/7/08 . chapter 1not to be mean but was a little rushed but it was good |
Bluemoon4Sphinx 8/5/08 . chapter 8Bastet: I've been mentioned! :D I'm finally being recognized for the goddess I am! Amanda: Not really...you're a demon, actually. You just made yourself off to be a goddess so it would be easier to obtain the materials you needed to create the shadow items... which, in all honesty, weren't very original; just less powerful copies of the original items. You really put up a lot of effort for nothing, really. You just ended up getting murdered for it. Not very smart, if I do say so myself. Bastet:...fuck you. Amanda:Gladly!...Again, not really. Bastet:#$ %#! :O (Amanda: Sorry about that. We're having a bit of a spat right now,so i'm trying my best to annoy her.) This is really interesting! Damn, you know, vault does the same thing to me. Love the stuff to death. Bakura's GOT to be embarassed by now! XD Aw, Yami's a little sicky. As for the riddle, the only thing(or person, rather), I can think of at this point is Tenshi. If this is refering to the christian religon( which would be odd, considering the main characters are probably shinto and/or buddist and egyptian), the religious would meet at a church. Why are they there? Well both her names could be an answer; hikari, light,to worship/veiw the light of god, or tenshi, angel, so they'll become angels when they die. Then again, this is just one big elaborate guess. Forgive me if i've taken up too much of your time with a wrong answer. XD Like the story, please update soon! -Amanda(AKA Beckara) |
Hocapontas 6/28/08 . chapter 8Does Bastet not care about Yugi? If Yami dies, even though i know you won't kill him, Yugi wiill be devastated and probably soon jion him. Please update. I'me loving this story! |
FifthDayOfMay 3/26/08 . chapter 1 Good chapie, really funny, I loved the scene with the rod, LOL! Just thought I should tell you though that Bakura's eyes are grey or silver not red, it Yami who has the red eyes, the Ishtars both have sort of light purple eyes...maybe Lilac, and Yugi has amethyst eyes, you got Ryou'right though. Also Bakura seems like he would be more inclined to wear his black trench coat over maybe some jean and a white and blue shirt...maybe something red or dark blue actually...yeah, red or dark blue are colors that suit him. Other then that your chapter didn't really flow, it looked like it was a little rushed and I can understand why that is cause I have that same problem, but putting that aside this was really funny! And in the end isn't that whats really important? |
Animemusic16 3/10/08 . chapter 3when they mean an enemy will become a friend,will Draco will become friends with Harry? |