 hanna 2009-11-26 . chapter 17 cool! :D
I made a pic of Ren, I thought her cute x)
here's the link if you're interested in seeing it :)
~> http ://i973 .photobucket .com/albums/ae215/hannaxisde/ren .jpg
just remove the spaces n.n''
bye! |
 LilNeko 2009-11-01 . chapter 8 What is the "thing".
I like it so far. n_n |
 LilNeko 2009-11-01 . chapter 7 aww.. poor ren. I don't like Myu shes too evil. |
 LilNako 2009-11-01 . chapter 6 Love triangle. peepers, what else could u ask for. lol |
 LilNako 2009-11-01 . chapter 5 Nice. the size i guess does matter..
lol maby she should eat him. |
 LilNako 2009-11-01 . chapter 4 i hate clif hangers. wish school was this cool.. |
 LilNako 2009-11-01 . chapter 3 I wonder why Ren is looking a ben.
keep up the great work!
I always love reading your storys. |
 LilNako 2009-11-01 . chapter 2 haha luv how they made fun of gwen. I think myu is gonna be my fav. ch. |
 LilNako 2009-11-01 . chapter 1 Awsome. I dont know about the night crawlers..tho. Funny them playing with the omnitrix all night. Why does Gwen all ways a downer?
I cant wait to read the rest of your story. n_n |
 Omnitrix1 2009-08-10 . chapter 16This story rocked' I just have one question: what does OVA stand for? |
 Omnitrix1 2009-08-10 . chapter 11who's the groundhog alien? |
 Omnitrix1 2009-08-10 . chapter 2Kevin's last name is Levin, not Elf. Besides that, this story rocked. |
 nuri kadri 2009-01-20 . chapter 16this was really a great story i love it too much and after all thats happening you finish it with normal series way. i mean they are on earth and go normal school with ben have omnitrix and gwen have her powers. |
 nuri kadri 2009-01-20 . chapter 10well i think ren's short horns is a good thing for her after all because ben can freak out from horns.
i like this story to much because we can see gwen with amnutrix and kevin with them too and i think your writing style is really good. |
 Maixcell 2009-01-04 . chapter 16Hello Mr. Evil! Like I said I read through Hero High and now I'm gonna read the rest!! Again two thumbs up and five stars (Which makes it 4 thumbs up and 10 stars if you add my first review! ;) ) |