Well done on the story and also well done on the cliffhanger ending.

Yay! There is a sequel! I have to go find it...

Kevin is changing from alien to alien too quickly...

Uh-oh. By the way, Tamaranians, like from Tamaran, as in Starfire of the Teen Titans? And when did Vilgax learn to make the Omnitrix? That can't be good.

Myu is very evil.

why do they call Ren Wonder Girl? Does that come up more in future chapters? Oh, by the way, is there going to be a sequel to this?

Ben shouldn't be a prevert. I don't like that. Kevin is the kindof person that would do that.

I like your story. I was wondering if I could put it on my website. It is basically a kid-friendly version of So, can I put your Hero High fic on my website? There is a link to it on my profile. If I try to send the link in the PM system, it doesn't work.

I'm loving the story but i just have one problem with it. it is nothing major just a myth popularised by the media, it's to do with the radio communications and how you end it with "over and out" which are in fact two contradictory terms. Over means you have the message and i want a reply, out is saying i have your message now shut up. it's just me being a pain in the arse and this holds no real importance so just ignore it really

good.

Eve

wow that was totally... COOL! Out of everything I like the Ben and Ren pairing cuz it seem wierd and they're opposite so they go perfectly together. I give it 2 thumbs up and 5 stars *

Gwen's got magic now. What a lucky girl...

Of course, Ben's lucky too, having Ren stay close. It's a set-up with a lot of fun potential. Much like how the story started, but in a vastly different direction. Instead of Ben and Gwen being the aliens in an intergalactic school, Ben, Gwen, and Max must take care of a beautiful alien on Earth.

It was a great story and introduction. See you in the sequel story, Mr. Evil!

So it's a happy ending after all. I was sort of hoping any continuation would happen on alien planets, but oh well.

Heh, so Myu couldn't resist setting Ben up one last time.

It will be interesting how Ren will adjust to Earth life.

Kevin's about to get what coming to him, but he's not going down without a fight! It's good that Myu's actually helpful in the right situation. There's more to her than just a shallow gossip. Cool.

Oh no, it was all a trap! Now Kevin's got Ben right where he wants him. It's going to be tense fight! Good job.