wat the f!!? dude instead of making fubuki the sensei u cud have it some female warrior who was really strong and wanted to pass on her knowledge onto someone else cuz she didnt have much time left and then appears our darling yuya whose supposedly got the eyes of a potential master warrior! the reason for yuya to coming to japan was that
1. wipe ur conscience clear girl!
2. kill her powerful sister who's gained ultimate immortality(aka blood+)

P.S.-it seems that yuya a distant relative of her sensei and her sensei's dying only becuz she's denied immortality

Oh, I'm crying, that was so sad.

thats so sad!! good story though

Actually, I cried like a baby when Fubuki died.


Nice story.

I'm amazed. You have talent that goes farther than even Anne McCaffery, farther than Rowling. You've managed to do what no other author has... you made me FEEL every single thing that the characters went through, both emotionally and physically. I have a gift that allows me to put myself in the characters shoes, but NEVER have I felt the pain of the characters like you made me feel with this story. If you need a beta reader, I'd be honored to be the one to do it for you. You've become my favorite author in just a couple of hours, and I'm using you as my insperation, as I too write stories.

curse you...*weep*

I am enjoying the story please keep writing! Longer chapters please :)

Oh, your story is so heart-wrenching!! >< Despite your minor grammar problems, "Seven Years Later" was a wonderful insight into your imagination! The cliff-hangers were truly suspenseful (but if I may add, the first several chapters were a bit [disappointingly] short and sharp). Nonetheless, your story has been one of the best I've come across when it comes to SDK! Keep up the magnificent work.

anybody got a kleenex?
stumbled over this story at quite a late time, but it caught me. I just read on and on and on and i cried... geez, my cheeks still wet. but it was a beautyfull story. so beautyfull.
see it's way past my bedtime now, but I just wanted you to know that I absolutely loved it. sorry for the spelling anyways, hope this review is usefull to U i any case.

Aw, I'm screaming. Not in sadness, but in happiness! ^^ thank you very MUCH for killing our dear Yuya-chan... I HATE HER! YEAH, WOHO, SHE'S DEAD, MAN! may her soul not rest in peace, may her body be eaten by earthworms... yea, yea, yea, she's dead, she's dead, she's dead! am i weird? am i insane? ugh, i myself dun't think so... look, sdkfans in my country never like yuya... even some of us DO HATE her... extremely ^^

yea that is so sad. I am so creaming obsenity (not at you at the sad ending plot and the tradegy.) I am so sad and I thought it will be happly after story. I hate tragedy.

You know the things about fan you had said. I also had a story that involves around SDK abouut fanns too. It is not fair. Now that idea is not origanl in the SDK section. -pouts like a child- 8(

Aw... so sad! My kind of story :)

OMG! Kyo holding Yuya... That moment was just so...beautiful... And the ending was really good, I was almost crying! Update soon!

My eyes sting.. But no tears. Could be because of my mood swings. I hope your next story features long chapters. I'm being cruel, no?

GAH!! No you did kill her! I knew it! This is so terribly sad. *cries* Poor Kyo, ne! I feel SO bad for him! Wah!

Wait...I'm embarrassed if I just forgot, but who is Hime again? @.x;

But anyway...thank you for a lovely story. I do believe it's over, correct?

A job well done if you are indeed done. Fantastic as always. *huddles in a ball* -cries more-