 loretta537 2008-08-11 . chapter 7this is a great story, I cant wait to see what happens in the sequel |
 Totto-chan 2006-09-24 . chapter 3Ah, yes. Of course Kio brought home another Fighter unit...I'm not sure whether to feel sorry for Kio (in the sense that he can't seem to do things right), or whether to be worried for Ritsuka and Soubi. |
 Mierkai 2006-09-18 . chapter 2Ha!! Ironic Kio would find someone Soubi knows. Very good chapter, kinda short though. Oh well, can't wait for the next one! |
 makenzi 2006-09-11 . chapter 1wow this looks like a good story! write more! im interested! |
 Totto-chan 2006-09-10 . chapter 1Yatta! A sequel!
This (like Why) is fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Poor Kio, not being allowed to get a cat... |
 Manga Girls 2006-09-06 . chapter 1I really like this story so far. The Loveless world seems really entertaining when seen through the eye's of Kio. Even more funny that the kitten looks like Sou-chan. What I'm really intrigued about is the ending, and the mention of Ritsu. You don't often see Ritsu in fanfic stories, which is surprising, particulary considering how much of an impact he has made on Soubi's life. You only have to see Soubi's butterfly paintings to realise this.
Will Ritsu make an appearance in this story? It will help us see another side of Soubi, but more importantly, Kio will see Soubi in a new light. How would he react? Perhaps he thought he knew Soubi, but now he's not sure. The existence of secrets -how will this effect their relationship. Who knows...
Anyway, I hope you don't mind my suggestion.
I will be looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Frosty Pig 2006-09-04 . chapter 1That was so cute! Kio has no backbone, loved it! ^_^! |
 wIlloFoNe792 2006-09-04 . chapter 1Hm, this is a good begginning. I hope you post the next chapter soon. |
 Mierkai 2006-09-03 . chapter 1Yay, finally the sequel. I love the first chapter, they should so get a kitten, even if Kio has to do it behind Soubi's back... |